Undone
by jmoore

Comment:
I like the lighting , pose and background. Very good. 10

Mischievous
by DogAngel

Comment:
This is really cute. Some catchlights in his eyes would have added a spark to the portrait. Possibly moving the lighting just a bit.

Cowboy
by Balko

Comment:
I like the weed in his mouth, but the part that's dangling is bothering me. We use to do this same thing, only without the fuzzy part. Overall this is a great character type portrait. The hat shadowing his eyes gives him mystery, he could be any cowboy. Good capture.

Just Being Me
by smilebig4me1x

Comment:
Good composition and expresion. Color cast across white of eye is a little distracting.

Hummingbird Portrait
by TomH1000

Comment:
This is the best portrait of a hummingbird I have ever seen. Can't wait to find out what camera you are using. Focus is right where it should be on his head, blurring of wings is great and all colors are too. If he had been up a bit higher so his beak was straight on with the flower, I would have scored it 11 , LOL, instead I have to give you a 10.

So Sixties ...
by GeneralE

Comment:
This is really neat. Basically I like the colors overall , but I find the yellow around her near eye to be distracting, it almost looks like a bad yellowish green rash. The composition is great and her expression is too. Wondering if the original version might have been even better.

the only one who would sit for a portrait....Callie
by madison461

Comment:
Callie was probably the best choice anyway. Except for the tiny tip of her ear missing and the little bits of grass showing at the bottom, she is purrfect. 9

Relaxation
by Dufus

Comment:
Beautiful lighting. Catchlights in her eyes and on her ring are perfect. Overall it sets a wonderful mood that is reflected inyour title. Even though the fire is so bright that it could be the center of attention, you have captured her face in a way that makes sure that the focus remains where it belongs.Very well done. 10

Charm
by magnus

Comment:
Lovely model. Pose is good, and lighting on the right side is very nice,but I find the shadowed side to be a bit too dark. A touch of light would have brought her eyes and her teeth out in a most pleasing way. Possibly if you had used a relector on that side to bounce some light in. Also, there appears to be a shadow on the left side , if this was caused by the models arm, you could try moving her a bit farther away from the background.

'Alesha'
by suemack

Comment:
Excellent focus, but the lighting it so harsh that it is hard to look at and it is very unflattering to the model. With softer lighting her best features would have been enhanced.