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09/22/2005 06:35:13 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
This is a funny picture. I like the facial expression and it totally matches the title, he really looks like he's secretely planning something. Great capture.
As far as the composition, nice job with filling the frame. I think a slighly tighter crop would have been beneficial as it would have gotten rid of the distracting bright area on the lower right corner. My eyes keep getting drawn to it and it takes attention away from the subject. Since this was an Advanced Editing challenge, I would have probably gotten rid of the bright spot on his right shoulder and on the middle right hand area of the picture as well.
The focus is right for a portrait of this nature but I think perhaps slightly sharper eyes would look better. The lighting is also good, no blown highlights. Keep up the good work.
If you have any questions or comments about this critique, please feel free to PM me.
June
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09/15/2005 09:41:32 AM |
| Awwwww, so cute! What a great little expression you captured. The composition is good, nice that it's off centered and the colors are nice. Good lighting. |
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09/15/2005 08:24:10 AM |
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09/14/2005 02:10:24 AM |
| This is really cute. Some catchlights in his eyes would have added a spark to the portrait. Possibly moving the lighting just a bit. |
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09/14/2005 01:26:53 AM |
| That is so cute. Good capture and nice overall shot. |
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09/14/2005 12:11:50 AM |
| What a wonderful portrait! |
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09/13/2005 10:40:19 PM |
| Awww, what a cutie! Great capture of the tongue. A bit more clearly focused around those big eyes and I would have scored it higher. |
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09/12/2005 09:42:42 PM |
| Cute, the lighting is a bit flat and it appears yellow on my screen. |
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09/12/2005 07:23:32 PM |
| Great picture! he is paying so much attention! Wonder what he might do next... |
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09/12/2005 07:23:30 PM |
| Oh my....whatever is making he/she so hungry that expression is doing the same to me. Nice shot, cool angle - I wish is wasn't so tight and had the rest of the head and maybe less of the shirt. Gotta go...I'm starvin (lol) -- nice job. |
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09/12/2005 04:51:41 PM |
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09/12/2005 02:49:30 PM |
| Awesome! Really love this shot! What a doll! |
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09/12/2005 11:20:12 AM |
| How adorable! What a precious capture! |
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09/12/2005 11:09:34 AM |
| uh huh, skin tones are incredible, think i know who this is |
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09/12/2005 10:19:50 AM |
| How cute is THAT!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!! |
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09/12/2005 01:20:17 AM |
| I love the whole shot, but its so dark! Great expression, beautiful eyes. The sleeve on the right really needed to be cropped. I hope it helps! 7 |
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09/12/2005 01:19:39 AM |
| Picture seems just a tad dark. Would like to see those big blue eyes pop out more. |
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