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| 05/03/2005 08:26:05 PM |
The Roseby TDCollinsComment: Nicely composed but your lighting is too harsh and unimaginitive and creates a very flat image effect. Move your lights around a bit more and pull the flower away from the background and this could be a very gorgeous shot. As is, kinda average...
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| 05/03/2005 08:24:32 PM |
Up Up and Awayby autoolComment: If you cropped the ground out and included more sky above the plane (so it looks like it is flying up into the frame) you would have all your viewers going 'how the hell did he get that shot!' Great use of color against an almost monotone background to make the subject really jump out of the shot. This is a good example of what (to me) the challenge was all about. Now just get rid of the ground and this would be a super wow shot!
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| 05/03/2005 08:22:01 PM |
Gear for Timeby bcobleComment: Not a bad idea, but I don't like jamming the subject as far into the corner as you have here. Also you have something in the black background that draws attention. (I thought my monitor was dirty at first :-P)
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| 05/03/2005 08:20:34 PM |
American Flagby sabphotoComment: I'm assuming that you are in the military yourself if you have access to the raising/lowering of the flag ceremony. Thank you and all your fellow sailors for your service. We as Americans owe you a huge debt of gratitude! As to the shot. Your colors seem very flat. What time of day was this shot? It looks underexposed. It's also very soft. Either the sailor or the flag seem like they should be in sharp focus. Witht the challenge subject and the title of your shot I would prefer the flag to be in focus. The colors may be fixable with photoshop. The sharpness issue requires a reshoot.
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| 05/03/2005 08:02:16 PM |
Gone Fishinby Travis99Comment: Very nicely done. ONly real complaint is the OOF leaves on the right side of the frame. Great tonality! Gives it a warm fuzzy feeling.
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| 05/03/2005 07:58:41 PM |
Symbolismby JPRComment: I'm sure you're trying to say something by having the shot oriented in this way. However; when I turn my head 90 degrees to the right, I see a much more powerfull composition. Call me traditional...
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| 05/03/2005 07:55:01 PM |
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| 05/03/2005 07:54:35 PM |
This Wayby SiRaComment: Very interesting and unusual perspective. Crosswalk?
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| 05/03/2005 07:53:46 PM |
Gravityby sofapezComment: I understand what you are going for here, but I'm put off a bit by the narrowness of the crop. Your subject IMHO needs to be a touch sharper (maybe a bit more light on the subject and a bit less on the background would help here?) Also, your bold border doesn't add anything IMHO and pulls your eye to the outside instead of directing it to the image itself.
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| 05/03/2005 07:51:12 PM |
Grape Hyacinthby drake217Comment: Nicely composed. I'm a tad bit put off by the darkness of the background on the left. It makes the shot seem just a bit off balanced. Also for a shot like this I think you need to be much sharper on the flower (front to back) or go for a soft focus effect. This looks stuck in between.
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