This wasn't my favourite pose, however I expected to come back and see it way up near the top 10. Didn't deserve to be way down here. Don't get discouraged hopper, you are showing some great talent!!
Love the DOF. Don't care too much for the pose. Maybe if her hands were locked together under her chin it would add to the symmetry? Or just one hand under her chin? Ok I just don't care too much for the way the chin looks here. :)
expression on model's face isn't natural. pose is interesting, but i think you should have positioned her head so that it was better in line with the rest of her body
Nice lines in this one, I acctually like the pose too eventhough it looke abit strained. The lighting is ok. I think maybe slihgtly tighter crop in the bottom could have put her head a bit less central and thus given a better composition, but it's not a biggy. 6
The picture overall is great, would loved to have the right and left sides cropped in a bit tighter, and less pressure from cheek from the back of her hand. - From the Wife. 7/10
I like the look in the models eyes. The shot is done very well tech. kudos on that. Now lets talk about the pose. The hand is stretching the face way out of proportion and the length of the pose is pulling focal points way to far back in the grame. the crease in the arm on the left side is distracting and the shade of lipstick doesn't match the skin tone. I do like the hiar and light on the face. I like where the left hand is also great shot overall
I think this particular pose makes her arms look really fat... not very flattering to the model. Perhaps a hands on the arms facial shot, because she is so pretty. Also, the lines in the background are very distracting, but great focus and centering
Hopper, to not only have exceptional photographic talent but also such a beautiful model at your fingertips is just a double blessing!!! Wonderful image, as usual. :)
Love the concept, but I think you should have lowered your body a little more....I dont think capturing her leg and feet added to the feel of this shot. The light is good.
Very nice protrait. I had tried something similar in the portrait mentorship thread, and got a useful comment - try shooting from lower angle - that would allow you to focus more on the model and not have the blue jeans distracting.
This is really well constructed with the girl only laying on the lighter stone and framed by the darker ones. Lovely natural look on the girls face, Well Done!
interesting use of the lines. Almost draws your attention towards her feet - not sure if you intended to do that. I wish I used guides better in my shots.
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