Hana
by muckpond

Comment:
Lovely shot. I can feel the softness of her back - the light on it is beautiful. I think it would be nice to have just a little side light on her face, to separate the skin of her face from her hair.
6, Kavey

Pure
by Patella

Comment:
Nice idea, too limited a colour palette for my own taste.
Kavey

Pen Envy
by KarenB

Comment:
Like the movement and the composition, with it's clever use of white space and the subtle shadows.
5, Kavey

Disappearing Act
by mci

Comment:
Interesting idea and the pencil looks so vibrant. Did you also try this with any other images as the ones being erased?
Kavey

It's All In The Angles
by CPattee

Comment:
Nice composition, unusual subject matter. Iike that everything is positioned such that we don't see bits of houses and other cars and feet and anything at all which isn't intended to be in shot. I also really like the reflection on the car, particularly the tree.
6, Kavey

Form Precludes Function
by sjgleah

Comment:
I love the diagonal with the paper/ desk delineated by the spiral binding. And of course I like the pencil and shavings. I find there's a little too much shadow around the lower left hand side and the pencil tip is too close to edge of frame at the bottom right corner. Would like the diagonal of the white paper to go right into corner at top left, and have more space at bottom right.
Very nice shot and idea.
7, Kavey

Too Fine a Point
by welcher

Comment:
I think this is lovely - clean, wonderful use of white space, and I think the DOF is exactly right. Nothing I would change.
8, Kavey

Walking Stick
by darylbrown

Comment:
A little too dark overall, just too much black. Nice rich colours though.
Kavey

Ticonderoga Cutting
by mcmurma

Comment:
This is just beautiful, and also clever. I don't like the way the rest of the glass is cut off. I think if you're not wanting the stem etc in your frame maybe it would work better with a regular tall thin tumbler so there would be no need to crop some out?
7, Kavey

Self Portrait No. 2
by chakkobbo

Comment:
A little too monochrome but I love the shadow cast by the pencil and the angle of it. How did you get it to stay up?
Kavey