Left Behind
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice shot, but common subject.
Composition:
I would like to see the doll in the far most corner. That will give a feeling of left behind. Here doll is very close. But I assume you wanted to use the natural light from window. May be a different time of the day when the light is in the upper left corner...
Subject:
Common subject for this kind of challenge, but nicely executed.
Technical (Colour and light):
Lighting is perfect. Natural lights adds more to this kind if shot. I really like the BW / Duotome effect.
Improvement:
Composition
Summary:
Nice over all picture with good exposure and focus.

Congratualtions.

Retake on Window Framed
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Colors add little more to this comapre to the original.
Composition:
Height is just 393 pixels. I would like to see more height.
Subject:
Improvement over the origianl in terms of colors and interesting coulds. But the composition is almost smae. I don't know if there were any comments on the original about the height.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting okay.
Improvement:
Different composition which allows more height.
Summary:
Just notices the take two is almost same score as the original.

Keep Shooting, Cheers!!!

Walk in the Woods
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Very Nice shot, with WOW factor.
Composition:
Very good composition. Just wondering if it would have looked even better with camera even lower on the ground.
Subject:
I really like the subject. Very nice green rein forest colors. Just Wonderful
Technical (Colour and light):
Great colors and lighting with perfect exposure.
Improvement:
Nothing but just one thing. Shot from little lower almost on the road without any tripod.
Summary:
Nice over all picture. I really liked it and firmly believe it deserves better than what it got.

Congrates on very nice image. Keep shooting...Cheers!!

tag.... you're it!
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice cute shot.
Composition:
Composition is okay, but for this particular challenge you can exclude the faces of the kids. But the expression and kids are so cute, you tempt to include in the frame. For the shadow challenge, you could have done different crop witout the faces.
Subject:
I really like the subject. Nice take on the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting in the front is perfect.
Improvement:
Different crop.
Summary:
Nice over all image, with cute kids.

Cheers!!

Ahhh....
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry for not being able to comment for a while on your entries.

First Impression
Good take on challenge, with okay execution.
Composition:
Did not like the panaromic view. Looks too small for DPC. Also, I didn't like too much bubles.
Subject:
Like the subject, meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting in the front is okay.
Improvement:
Regular corp instead panaromic. Less bubles, may be tripod little bit higer.
Summary:
Good idea, with regualr corp and different angle would have scored more.

Cheers!!

Moonlight Serenade
by alfresco

Comment:
All I can say is WOW. What a wonderful shot!!!!!! I would agree with dsa157.

Message edited by author 2006-06-23 17:46:37.

Crevasse
by Jutilda

Comment:
Nice one Judy. Good lighting and sharp focus. Continue great with the great scores..WPL2 is just around the corner.

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice shot.
Composition:
Good Composition.
Subject:
Nice, meets the challenge
Technical (Colour and light):
The focus is very soft on the faces. I don't know if it's over done in proceesing or not. Not sure if you use NI to reduce noise. But the focus in not there quite right on the faces.
Improvement:
Focus.
Summary:
Nice over all image lacking the proper focus or processing is over done.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Ninja Lenscaps from Canon
by blackenedwhite

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry, I was off the hook for a while.

First Impression
Like the idea, don't like the execution.
Composition:
Composition is alright.
Subject:
Fits the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
Don't think the border really goes with the picture. The lights on the lemon is blown out. When I look at the picture, my eyes first goes on the bright yellow border and then goes to the blown out area on the lemon.
Improvement:
Border and blown out as mentioned above.
Summary:
Not one of your great shot technically.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Desvasidized
by blackenedwhite

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry, I was off the hook for a while.

First Impression
Very Nice strong image.
Composition:
Good Composition.
Subject:
Very nice.
Technical (Colour and light):
Very nice. I really like the sharpness, it makes the image even stonger.
Improvement:
More details on the hair and BG, but I don't think it was possible because it was Single Light Source challenge.
Summary:
Very nice strong image. Looks more like the shot from one of my favorite photographer on DPC - "Librodo"

Congratulations on your Personal Best. Keep shooting.

Message edited by author 2006-06-16 13:59:52.