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06/24/2006 02:52:13 PM |
Greetings from your own critique club.
First Impression
Nice cute shot.
Composition:
Composition is okay, but for this particular challenge you can exclude the faces of the kids. But the expression and kids are so cute, you tempt to include in the frame. For the shadow challenge, you could have done different crop witout the faces.
Subject:
I really like the subject. Nice take on the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting in the front is perfect.
Improvement:
Different crop.
Summary:
Nice over all image, with cute kids.
Cheers!!
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06/24/2006 11:26:20 AM |
Hi!
So cute!! I think the shadows still seem to be the main element and the croppin doesn't bother me. They are very cute:) |
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06/21/2006 01:07:23 AM |
Hi Margie!
What a couple of cuties! I love the way your daughter's pigtails are caught mid-bounce.
You did well capturing a shadow and really making it a main element in the photo. A lot of the other entries included a shadow but weren't about the shadow, and you've avoided that particular pitfall of the theme. I do think the light here is a bit harsh, and it should use some sharpening. I think a polarizer might help tone down the brightness, since I know the kids probably don't play like that at sunrise when the light is all golden and pretty. |
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06/20/2006 12:56:26 PM |
Hello from Álex, CTP MkII
First Impression: Good idea to ask the kids play with the shadows, and very funny
Composition: I agree with you, it's better with the kids on it.
Subject: Very good
Technical: the colors are not as bright as I would like to (maybe the light was too harsh). And seem you had a problem with the jpeg conversion, because I see some artifacts (on the face of her, i.e.)
Improvement: jpeg conversion, light.
Summary: Good shot, very consistent scores this week...
Álex
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06/18/2006 11:58:43 PM |
| great capture of terrific models who made highly illustrative shadows. 8. |
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06/18/2006 12:48:55 PM |
| Also looks like a relay race : ) |
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06/17/2006 08:08:23 PM |
| another child photo shadow thing. however, these shadows emphasize the action and purpose of photo, so you get a thumb's up. however, consider going with black and white when color doesn't help, like here. or perhaps with a subtl desat. |
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06/17/2006 02:19:09 PM |
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06/17/2006 02:36:39 AM |
| The dirt in the background is somewhat distracting otherwise well done.. 7 |
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06/15/2006 07:05:49 PM |
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06/15/2006 04:32:27 PM |
great shot. only thing is the blowouts on this one, in the hair/arms from the sun being directly ahead. might have used a faster shutter speed. the far bacground is somewhat distracting as well. these kids are definitely adorable, and spite what i pointed out, this is definitely a great capture. looking forward to seeing more pictures from you of these darling children. 5
good luck! |
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06/15/2006 09:12:22 AM |
| I'm really curious as to how you got that extra shadow in there. |
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06/15/2006 06:37:45 AM |
| Hehehe...now that is fun. |
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06/15/2006 12:08:26 AM |
| Great capture... it almost looks as if the the shadow is telling a different story from the main image.. |
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06/14/2006 08:02:24 AM |
| They are so cute! I love this image, the lighting is a little harsh though. |
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06/13/2006 08:24:31 PM |
| I really like the use of the shadows in this picture... The pulling of hair idea is full of humour. How long did it take you to get them in that exact pose? |
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06/13/2006 12:27:33 PM |
| Really nice job of incorporating the challenge into your subject. Too bad the background wasn't prettier. |
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06/13/2006 10:21:03 AM |
| Oh to be a child again! nice shot...love the title and expressions |
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06/12/2006 10:12:24 PM |
| Very Very cute....nice picture. |
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06/12/2006 07:29:51 PM |
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06/12/2006 04:13:54 PM |
| I think the capture of the shadow is very interesting. I might have taken this further and cropped for just the shadows, eliminating the chidren, or maybe just included their feet and legs. I really dislike the dirt backgroundIt's very distracting. |
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06/12/2006 07:29:05 AM |
| So sweet, and so very cute..... |
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06/12/2006 12:47:50 AM |
| less belivible with the lad looking at the shadow but cute idea |
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06/12/2006 12:38:23 AM |
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