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Retake on Window Framed
Retake on Window Framed
margiemu


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Take Two (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF 28-80mm f/2.8-4 L USM
Location: my rec room
Date: Jun 1, 2006
Date Uploaded: Jun 1, 2006

 This was a hard challenge to shoot for, since a lot of my entires were either really boring subject wise, or else imposssible to reproduce. This one I at least could do again, since my window hasn't shifted in the last month. The most notable comment I got was that the view out my window was too 'generic', so I re-shot at a more dramatic time of day (which is actually what I wanted to do for the initial challenge, but we had really lame sunrises all that week). The one thing I couldn't fix is the uneven sides, because I angled out the window to avoid the house that is to the right.

Statistics
Place: 123 out of 161
Avg (all users): 5.4395
Avg (commenters): 5.8000
Avg (participants): 5.3088
Avg (non-participants): 5.5393
Views since voting: 797
Views during voting: 216
Votes: 157
Comments: 7
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AuthorThread
 06/24/2006 03:05:44 PM
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Colors add little more to this comapre to the original.
Composition:
Height is just 393 pixels. I would like to see more height.
Subject:
Improvement over the origianl in terms of colors and interesting coulds. But the composition is almost smae. I don't know if there were any comments on the original about the height.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting okay.
Improvement:
Different composition which allows more height.
Summary:
Just notices the take two is almost same score as the original.

Keep Shooting, Cheers!!!
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 06/15/2006 10:08:01 AM
CTCP2 Gunnsi
First impression:
It is dark and overblown. Beautiful colours there in between.
I like the other one more than I do this one.
What can you do better?
It is better to take a dark photograph of clouds and use post processing to lighten it up with levels. It is impossible to fix blown clouds. I am no expert but my "Fool on the Hill" photo is a good example on clouds before and after.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/12/2006 09:11:36 PM
Nice sunset, but the original image seems to be better overall. I can't figure out why. Maybe it seems to have better clarity. Anyway, it is nice to see the various moods one window can give you. Quite a view if that is what you get to look at every day.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/11/2006 11:26:47 PM
Nice contrast of blues and pinks...very nice light. 8
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 06/10/2006 12:26:12 AM
Great colours. I like the blues of the hills.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/06/2006 07:32:02 AM
The sky is beautiful but also a little blown out at the top.
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 06/06/2006 05:41:28 AM
Not sure if you were taking the frame out of the equation, but maybe a fill flash to put some light on the frame, this type of shot is very hard to be able to balance the light on both subjects....5
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