Light sandwich on white bread ("Light on white")
by bfbaggins

Comment:
The blue cast makes the bread look moldy. In general, I like the composition but feel some additional lighting might have made this more successful.

Pretty In Pink
by TheresaA

Comment:
I think the composition is what hurts this most. Centering the subject creates a stagnant composition in this case especially because the subject itself has no point of interest in itself. The lighting feels flat. And the merging with the edges of the frame makes this feel uncomfortably squeezed.

Blue on White
by xianart

Comment:
The tones in the skin are unappealing to me. The dark wisp of hair at the edge of the face is a distraction...a slightly different angle could have eliminated that and also might have provided a more interesting curve to the side of the face.

Ice Blue
by Jutilda

Comment:
What keeps this from being successful, in my opinion, is the loss of detail in the brightest parts of the cat (forehead and one side of the face) as well as the lack of crispness in the eyes. Would be more appealing with a less stunned expression and some connection between subject and viewer rather than gazing out of the frame.

Delicate
by pidge

Comment:
The orchid merges with the background and so loses its form. I don't like the way it merges with the frame on the right and wonder why you chose to compose it so.

A light meal
by beaflies

Comment:
I like the idea and the composition. I think I'd like it more if there were a bit more fill lighting as the shadows seem a bit heavy without reason.

Hurricane
by nards656

Comment:
Other than a wreath of feathers, I'm not sure what this is or why I should be interested in it.

Simplicity
by xXxscarletxXx

Comment:
The shadows compete with the form of the tiara. It also seems that this could have been more carefully composed so that the object could be enjoyed more. Not sure what all that white space does for it.

Baby plant (note: Sneaky Attempt - Subject is the plant which is light green - not the dirt)
by Cheerz

Comment:
The soil is an unattractive orange. I hate your title. Otherwise the composition and subject had a modicum of potential.

Angel
by rkligman

Comment:
With the harsh shadows on the inside of each wing it appears you've blurred out the shadows cast by the object on the background. The thing itself is an interesting piece of art but I faill to see what you've brought to its interpretation.