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| 10/08/2005 11:41:36 PM |
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| 10/08/2005 11:40:19 PM |
Black & Whiteby YoungerComment: The salt is overexposed; placing it behind the pepper would have helped. I'm intrigued by the reflections in the silver caps on these containers; a shot from above of this reflection might have been quite interesting. |
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| 10/08/2005 11:38:27 PM |
All Nighterby adamwebComment: I'd like this image better if it were a little less crowded. |
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| 10/08/2005 11:37:11 PM |
Triple Shot?by NaldComment: I'm curious to know how you did the skull & crossbones effect, but somehow the image looks too staged to effectively tell the intended story. The model's lack of strong expression would be fine if she weren't making eye contact with the camera, but a stronger look is required from someone caught poisoning someone's coffee.
The bright white of the coffee cup and the edge of the counter top draw unnecessary attention to them. Using a brighter light from farther away or softening up the light that fell on those objects would have helped to reduce this distraction. I would have liked the border better if it were darker (closer to a forest green). |
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| 10/08/2005 11:29:36 PM |
No liquids on busby ttreitComment: I love the bokeh and the indistinct contour along the bottom edge. The only things I'd change would be to (1) remove the white part of the border (or make it a less pure white - it creates too much tension between it and the off-white cup) and (2) alter the focus on the cup (either softer or tack-sharp focus would work, but as it is this looks just far enough from focus to look unintentional). I love the subtle interplay of warm and cool colors in the background. I don't normally go for anything that consists almost exclusively of a company logo, but you nailed everything else so well that I can't help but love this. This is easily my favorite image so far in the challenge. |
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| 10/08/2005 11:21:55 PM |
Symmetry of Coffeeby magueroComment: The speck in the bottom right corner is distracting, as is the obvious over-sharpening. The leading lines make for a strong composition. The odd shadows suggest that this was painted with light, which I think worked well. I wouldn't be surprised to see this in the top ten once the challenge ends. I think that a little more attention to detail could have made this a shoe-in for a ribbon.
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| 10/08/2005 11:15:58 PM |
Coffee Tabletopby Wilson LowComment: If this were sharper (allowing the features to be more readily identifiable) or more abstract this would work much better. As it is, it has enough recognizable features to make me try for a literal interpretation, and nothing I can identify is particularly interesting. |
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| 10/08/2005 11:13:17 PM |
into the deepby sodastreamerComment: This image seems to be lacking something. The strong contrast between the cup and the background is quite striking, but this high contrast seems to break down inside the cup. Perhaps rich, brown coffee with a sugar cube or mint sprig floating in it would have helped to complete the composition. Even so, this is my favorite image in the challenge so far. |
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| 10/08/2005 11:10:06 PM |
Into the Sea of wordsby WilltorecordComment: Compression artifacts and halos from sharpening are clearly visible in this image, which detracts from an otherwise solid shot. Selecting an area of interest and cropping more tightly would have removed a lot of the high-contrast edges (one of the factors which will cause a jpeg to quickly increase in size) and allowed you to use a lower compression.
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| 10/08/2005 11:06:04 PM |
waiterby mrezaComment: The angled railing in the foreground adds compositional interest, but I think that too much space was given to it and not quite enough to the waiter; his head is uncomfortably close to the edge of the frame.
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