Spokes 2
by banmorn

Comment by BMacD:
Hi! Here�s a comment from the Critique Club.

First Impression:
Nice shot! I like the way the lines lead my eyes to the �black hole�

Composition:
Really like the crop and the angle of your shot. B&W really works at highlighting the lines/curves.

Subject:
Given the forum traffic for this challenge, you met the challenge! (Thank you for a 2 second exposure!)

Technical:
I actually disagree with some of the comments below. I find the picture a bit grainy and the focus a little soft. Maybe it�s a monitor calibration issue. You mentioned sharpening twice. If you USM after resizing, you can make the picture a little more crisp.

Summary:
What were the chances of me drawing your picture again? I like the shot and your perspective. As mentioned below, the notion of time was not conveyed in you picture.

Other Worlds
by banmorn

Comment by sherpet:
Very good macro abstract as I have no idea what it is.....

Spokes 2
by banmorn

Comment by banmorn:
Thanks, Skip!

Color My World (Gracious)
by banmorn

Comment by GrayGhost:
Less-yellow white balance and plain background would be better.

Primrose Seltzer
by banmorn

Comment by Nyck:
nice bubbles!

Spokes 2
by banmorn

Comment by Skip:
what i wouldn't give for your eye for the simple abstract. you always leave me with my head shaking. great work, RoB!

Primrose Seltzer
by banmorn

Comment by whiteroom:
cute idea

Spokes 2
by banmorn

Comment by graphicfunk:
Right in your face. very nice. Bumping up.

Streams
by banmorn

Comment by rick13601:
Somewhat boring...

Spokes 2
by banmorn

Comment by MayaM:
This has nice visual appeal. Well done black and white(??I think).