Day 4
by edmeng

Comment:
Great lighting and you captured the various textures very well. Would have liked to see the metal parts on the left a bit more in focus - with the strong lines of this section leading in to the wheel, I find my eye is drawn to it, and I'm noticing the soft focus here more so than I would if the composition had been differently arranged. I have no idea if I just made any sense at all. :) But overall, I think you have texture and tone nailed very well in this image.

Symmetry
by sherpet

Comment:
This is a great idea - fantastic subject for the stitching technique and so nicely done.

Pelican and Pier #3
by robinssong

Comment:
That is such a lovely capture of an outstretched wing - fantastic tonal range, and the tone of the sky contrasts so well with the foreground subject. Wow.

Day 4 - Folds & Curves
by sherpet

Comment:
This is another great abstract. Love the lines, the bold cuts. Very Georgia O'Keefe.

Alley springs mill-6693.jpg
by griz210

Comment:
What a nice shimmery reflection you've got there - I think it was a good choice to allow it to take up 2/3 of the composition. You might want to play around with your tonal range a bit more, try to get the blacks as deeply black as they can go - and tweak the contrast just a bit more. Honestly I can't tell whether my suggestion would improve or spoil things, but that might be something to play with and see what happens.

Cathedral
by Melethia

Comment:
Such a dramatic looking shot, well-suited to the subject. Great. :)

3
by mia67

Comment:
What a fantastic range of tones in this shot, the framing is great, focus is great! If you can please share your processing steps...

Tulip Triptych
by Buckeye_Fan

Comment:
You're probably getting reamed a bit on your interpretation of triptych, but challenge requirements aside, I really like how you did this. Nice partition of the different effects and good color scheme.

A Cow's Life
by h2

Comment:
This is an interesting perspective and the two close-ups in particular are well shot. IMO the arrangement might be better if the two were on top of the one, rather than the way it currently is - just strikes me it might be more effective that way. I like how you went with documenting the ordinary for your triptych idea.

Sisters
by ShotMD

Comment:
Creative take on what is a triptych - it looks like they all had fun modeling for it! Possible improvement would be to have your middle model wearing a shirt that isn't quite so dark and contrasts better with the background.