Fun in the Dressingroom
by RxP13

Comment:
On board flash, red eye, dead center composition, title not really showing propaganda. I'm sure they're having fun, but this image doesn't seem to fit into this challenge. 4 -danny

"I do"
by Allyrellia

Comment:
That's what a chinchilla looks like? Cute lil buggar! I'm sure it was difficult to get the guy to stay still long enough for the shot, but your overall focus even on the monitor is soft. To get the 'ad' feel you're wanting, you need a tact sharp focus. A sharpening in your editing software after resize will help some. 5 -danny

Drink, Drive, and Die!
by PDavis

Comment:
Not sure the capabilities of your camera, but did you try a portrait mode view looking at the underside of both feet, shallowish DOF and the beer bottles and keys on the bed in the foreground? Something that would look more like an ad compain and not a hodge podge of ideas. 5 -danny

"I'm Sorry... It won't happen again" (Propaganda of an abusive spouse.)
by FactoryX

Comment:
Hrm... I can see a statement of you meaning to have the soft focus and underexposed shot, but to me it makes the image seem more of a snap shot than a planned shot. Did you try a black and white conversion with higher contrast? This might have given you more of an artistic interpretation. 5 -danny

Psst...Wanna Buy a Watch?
by mariomel

Comment:
I DO!

Did you try a portrait orientation for this shot? or a square crop to loose most of the right brighter part of the image. 6 -danny

Which one to choose?? hmmmm...
by andlb

Comment:
With the portrait orientation of the magazine, a portrait mode in your shot would be compositionally more pleasing. You also shot under tungsten lighting with your white balance not adjusted for it. This leaves a yellow cast to your shot. 5 -danny

We will hunt the whales again! But please don't boycot our Fish!
by eikidigi

Comment:
I think that a slight sharpen after resize would bring life back into these fish. :-)
Seriously, when you resize down you need to do a light sharpen afterwards to get your crispness back. 5 -danny

Ave' a Proper Gander at this !
by michael_p

Comment:
Overall not bad. The inverted colors actually makes for a more interesting composition. 6 -danny

Fallen
by mediamst

Comment:
Your image is 489 pixels on the long side. When you save the image, save it at 72 dpi and 640 pixel on the long side. This will give us a better view of your details. The image overall is powerful in it's statement. Good lighting and composition. I wouldn't mind seeing more of the hand. 8 -danny

POUR MOI - French Luxury Jewels Since 1781
by BBBastet

Comment:
Nice crop and layout. The overall lighting is lacking in this shot. You may need multiple lights and a light box around the jewels. There is a how to under the Learn link of someone who photo'd a watch, and they show step by step how they set up the lighting to get the best results. 5 -danny