January sunset in Florida
by qnjt

Comment:
Howdy from the Critique club:

First, your shot meets the challenge well. The jetski and wake show this well.

I like how you framed the shot. Nice sky, boat dock, vegetation and highway. These modifiers lead the eye nicely to the jetski.

The clouds and reflections add to the nice colors of the photo. Not sure how the photo could be improved since this shot was timely jetski action.

I hope this helps a bit. Keep shooting and having fun.

Van

Road safety -- did you look
by sn4psh07

Comment:
Howdy from the Critiques Club:

First your was shot is somewhat iffy on meeting the challenge, but what the heck. If you'd show movement in the bus behind or another vehicle, no question to action. This may be one reason for lower marks by some.

The sign with the frost is nice. The photo maybe cropped a bit to tight to show good action of modifier (vehicle) behind the sign. Possibly having the sign somewhat more off centered would have had a bit more interest and lead the eye to the movement behind the sign.

Your dof and sharpness are good. I love your "Give Way" much better than our "Yield".

I hope this helps a bit. Keep shooting.

Van

1 on 1
by spectre013

Comment:
Critique Club review:

Hey Brian, fellow Puebloan!!!!

Didn't know you were on board, welcome.

First, your shot meets the challenge very well. Hockey is definitely action at all times.

I agree with the comments provided, and add that for the distance you shot the photo, you did quite well. The World Arena is huge and you'd have to be at the glass to do any better. I have no real suggestions for photography improvements, this is strictly timing and you did well.

A bit of added contrast in P.S. may have brought the colors out a bit brighter, but CC's colors are gold and black which do show off well.

Hope this helps a bit. Keep in touch.

Van

Feed the Hungry
by vtruan

Comment:
By the way, it was a carrot flavored hotdog.

Desert Moonlight
by dsidwell

Comment:
This is the best of the show. Perfect in all ways.

To Touch Is To See
by Imagineer

Comment:
Nice soft focus.

Paris Las Vegas
by beekper

Comment:
A bit over exposed to me.

Roswell: After Dark
by mariomel

Comment:
Funny & cleaver.

Ciggie break in the cold
by kiwiness

Comment:
Great use of backlighting.

By the light of the full moon.
by willem

Comment:
Nice jetty!