Dreams vs. Career
by aaronb532

Comment:
Since this is one of my very top scores - I thought I'd try to give you my best shot at constructive comments.

First - let's talk technical: Exposure = perfect, composition = classic but effective, DoF = perfect.

On the artistic side: Idea = stunning, model = wonderful, background = a bit "commercial" for me, border = un-needed

Make it better by: 1) A logo on the baseball shirt (doesn't matter what it is - just something for the added impact) 2) No glove on the baseball hand - they don't use them.

Overall: I will be extremely surprised if you don't end up with a ribbon.

Midnight Run
by C-town driver

Comment:
Very graphic! Looks like your camera may have been in danger here - mounted outboard as the car was moving/turning. Extremely strong!

Classic sunset
by pitsaman

Comment:
Perfect time of day - lighting really works. Sun rays add a nice touch. Car looks pristine. I would suggest you re-think the need for this border.

Vintage Snapshot
by Tallbloke

Comment:
Nostalgia. Excellent back and white work with bright whites, black blacks and a reasonable tonal range in between. Your feathered edges are OK but become too much quickly if you went any further.

The Chauffeur
by Count

Comment:
Idea is superb - and a very nice dog. This is one case where I would suggest you open up, blur the background. As is, there's too much busy detail in the background.

Final Approach
by Kha0S

Comment:
Stunning image. The street and the car below are exceptionally graphic and well done. But, the wing flaps (I know you were going for bith airplanes and autos) take up too much of the image. I hope you tried the same shot with less wing.

Even with the wing flaps as is, it's a very strong and graphic submission.

Flight
by zeus68

Comment:
Nice idea, composition and execution.

Train, Jefferson City, Missouri, -2004
by dustin03

Comment:
Stunning composition - would have quakified for deep DoF. The moving train adds a unique perspective. The building dome and the very dark area around it seem a bit too unreal for me. Finally the telephone/electric wire are unfortunate.
Your black and white work is good with srong crisp whites and deep blacks.

Fly Ohio
by Marjo

Comment:
Nice rural capture. Good composition (except that the wind sock is a bit close to the top of the frame.) Exposure spot on.

Trulli Speeding
by wkoffel

Comment:
Beautifulk car! Try cropping out the yellow/black (text) in the top - think you will like it better.