Blue
by SJCarter

Comment:
Very abstract and original. I like this very much. The sunglasses bring it all together ! Love to here about this technique.

i've got a secret...
by bragur

Comment:
This is an interesting perspective. I didn't think I would likeit when i saw the thumbnail but i do. The blood vessels in her eyes are very distracting though. Great that you filled the frame with your model and lighting is right on.

Amy
by rayg544

Comment:
You have a very nice looking model. This photo could be improved by moving her at a more interesting angle, possibly getting yourself in a position a bit higher than your model. This usually gives a more flattering angle than straight on. The depth of field is very good . The shadows on her eyes not so good. The eyes should have some light in them to bring life to the portrait. You could possible use some fill flash here, if it wasn't too bright or a better choice would be a relector to bounce the light back into her face. PM me if you need any information on this technique, I would love to assit if I could.

N O S T A L G I A
by librodo

Comment:
Excellent lighting. Color and tone are beautiful, not to mention the model is too. Great job. 10

Tammy
by bongo

Comment:
You have lighting , composition and catchlights in here eyes. All is good. I would guess you have a studio and you sell your portraits.

Attitude
by postoakinversion

Comment:
The dramatic look is great, but I would have liked to have seen just a bit more of the left side of his face. It could be my monitor, but all I see there is a pin point of light from his eye and it is distracting instead of adding value.

Autumn Slumber
by kendall6

Comment:
Beautiful lighting and colors. Reminds me of another challenge photo. Great concept and executed to perfect. Love to here about your lighting set up. 10

Sleepy Jaxon
by lentil

Comment:
Soft , sweet, and closeup. All good.

Tiny Dancer
by xylke

Comment:
The focus should be on her eyes to really make this photo stand out. The color and composition are good.

Emma Louise
by Fleximus

Comment:
This has the makings of a good profile. The eyes are not turned too far away as some do, but the background is rather distracting and it bothers me that you cut the photo off mid way of her cheek. This is a case where seeing an ear or some hair would have been welcome. You feel like you have been left hanging here with something missing. Exposure and light are great. Very natural feeling.