First Nude
by phylsy7

Comment:
good job for a first. It has a mood to it and the model is lovely. To me, it looks like there were some problems with the post processing, mainly on the arms, and there could be a little more contrast.

Sensual Topography
by lioro

Comment:
this human landscape is well done. To me, the light around the drapes is distracting. A more solid background might have been more pleasing. I lke the composition.

Cold Embrace
by esdarby

Comment:
I think the grain is good for this one. sort of a pj type of shot. I think if the bottom was cropped out it would lend a little more mystery to the story. Some of the whites in the sheet are blown out and have a yellow tint. I just learned last night that cloth is 5 times more reflective than skin so extra care has to be given to avoid overexposure.

DP-IMG_5985.jpg
by Geocide

Comment:
This is good. I like the circle formed by his arm and foot, the definition of the whole body and the action. This would be great on a white background or with a rim light from camera right.

Back in black
by Fyzarl

Comment:
Very nice skin tone. A little light on the background on camera right would have created some separation between the model and background. My monitor is calibrated and I can just see the triangle formed by the shoulder on the dark right side. I think that side is need to balance out the broadness on the other shoulder.

All kinds of self-defence
by kevrobertson

Comment:
This is very interesting. I don't normally like the effect ni has on skin, but the use here gives the model a glow as if she is a cherub. The grasp on her breast and the expression on her face make me wonder what's going on. The shadow across her breast and the bracelet are distracting.

Myself.
by Tranquil

Comment:
am I going to get arrested? It's got mood. The only thing that is distracting is the nose shadow. Start collecting some small mirrors and using them to reflect light back into places you want to lighten up. If you know you are going to b/w, you can also mix up the types of light you use.

relax
by irishempress

Comment:
It is well exposed technically with the focus in the right place. There is a slight green tint to the picture on my monitor. The rings are a distraction. Imo, the crop is to tight cutting into both the elbow, hand and the breast.

Morning After
by ergo

Comment:
That's exactly how I used to feel when I woke up with a hangover. The brightness was just to much to handle.

bikini curve
by claudia26

Comment:
The exposure is good. I can't say this is exciting or that it holds my interest for very long.