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06/29/2004 12:56:25 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club.
This is a difficult one for me to critique because I know it's a ribbon winner, but it was really not among my favorites.
I think probably for me, the thing that most detracted from the photo was that there is so much going on. When I crop it to simply the oranges (and baskets) below that large chrome strip, I like it much better. The lighting and composition appear more snap-shotish to me.
I think the subject, the way all these oranges are laid out so nicely together, somehow could have made more impact. Maybe if the lighting was a little brighter or more interesting. Also, as I mentioned earlier, I would have come in closer to the oranges and left out all the upper part of the photo.
It seems I'm in the minority on this one and that's okay! I hope you find the comments helpful and congratulations on your ribbon!
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06/27/2004 07:29:08 PM |
| Congratulations... It is a very captivating shot. sometimes the picture says it all and what you see with your eye actually is captured by the camera!!.Good job |
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06/25/2004 09:42:40 AM |
Congratulations! A well deserved ribbon, lovely colours and composition.
sue
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06/24/2004 03:28:11 PM |
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06/24/2004 11:47:57 AM |
| Fantastic shot. Great composition. You did a great job of "seeing photographically" while you were out at the mall. Congratulations on your ribbon, it's well deserved! |
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06/23/2004 04:53:01 PM |
| I actually like this. It looks like a simple stock shot, but it certainly works for the challenge. you deserve your ribbon. |
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06/23/2004 12:04:37 PM |
| I loved this one the first time I saw it. Very clever and well photographed. Love the title too. Congratulations. Ann |
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06/23/2004 10:55:55 AM |
Thanks for all the comments!
I wanted to do another image. Was at a shopping center, and wanted to photograph something like a wall of TV's. Got a good image of a lady standing in front of a shoe store, then I saw this orange display at a fresh juice store. The colour & layout caught my eye, so I shot off a few images. They all came out OK.
I had to do a 0,8 degree rotation, crop, and increased the saturation a little to bring out the orange colour. Sharpened, resized, framed & Bingo! |
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06/23/2004 09:47:02 AM |
| Go Kiwi! Good to see a fellow New Zealander getting a ribbon, congrats! |
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06/23/2004 08:18:15 AM |
| Congratulations on the ribbon, very clever image. |
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06/23/2004 07:20:34 AM |
| didnt vote but this is a very clever and cool pic |
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06/23/2004 01:05:48 AM |
| Congratulations on your ribbon. This photo stood out! |
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06/23/2004 12:26:42 AM |
| I loved this shot. Well deserved ribbon!!! |
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06/23/2004 12:18:35 AM |
Stunning shot as I said before! (My favorite of the bunch.)
Orange cha' glad you chose it? (LOL)
Congrats on the ribbon! |
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06/23/2004 12:09:47 AM |
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06/22/2004 07:53:17 PM |
| Fun shot and probably my winner! Most interesting so far and it's well taken. |
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06/22/2004 07:13:58 PM |
| absolutely fantastic photo, one of my favorites thus far |
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06/22/2004 06:11:04 PM |
| Top three, just a great shot. Im sure you will get comments that it doesn't fit the challenge, but IMHO it does quite well and it creates an arresting shot with great geometry. |
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06/22/2004 12:36:43 PM |
The anti-choice!
Nicely done. The mirrors give the impression of an infinity of the oranges. |
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06/22/2004 01:10:42 AM |
| Great idea! My only problem with your image is that it includes too much. |
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06/21/2004 07:08:33 PM |
| like the effect the mirrors have |
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06/21/2004 01:36:44 PM |
| Nice work with the mirror and shapes here. Great color too. |
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06/21/2004 07:25:46 AM |
| I love the sense of abundance created by this image. The baskets brake up the image really well and a bit of life. |
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06/20/2004 11:23:20 AM |
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06/18/2004 08:34:19 PM |
| Vcool take and very unique. One of my two top picks!!! |
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06/18/2004 05:16:34 PM |
| fun! Nice composition and lighting |
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06/18/2004 09:34:10 AM |
| Cool! I would have cropped off a bit more at the top, just to get that line of chrome farther from the center, but it is still very cool. |
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06/18/2004 02:30:36 AM |
Simply outstanding composition.
My favorite of the bunch. ((10)) |
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06/16/2004 05:23:09 PM |
| Really neat photo. I would love to know where this was taken. |
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06/16/2004 04:41:07 PM |
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06/16/2004 11:28:10 AM |
| This must be the orange shot to end all orange shots. Very nice. |
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06/16/2004 12:17:15 AM |
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