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Challenge: Free Study 2008-11 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: Beverly Hills
Date: Nov 19, 2008
Aperture: 22.0
ISO: 100
Galleries: Abstract
Date Uploaded: Nov 23, 2008

 I shot this in the middle of the day using natural lighting. I know my exposure wasn,t set where I wanted,(I had to run into the middle of the street for this shot) but liked the abstract that it created.

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Place: 413 out of 417
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Avg (commenters): 4.0000
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Views since voting: 781
Views during voting: 227
Votes: 151
Comments: 7
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12/05/2008 09:57:47 AM
Not sharp enough, very distracting.
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 12/04/2008 06:23:32 PM
The patterns are really cool, I wish the dof was bigger
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 12/04/2008 06:03:06 PM
Compositionally you have the right idea. The technicals need some work. It's overexposed and there's motion blur. Try shooting at dawn or dusk or on an overcast day, and maybe cut out the sky to increase the sense of abstraction. And use a tripod. It might work better in black and white. (Check out my only ribbon for a similar architecture shot.)
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 12/04/2008 12:08:07 PM
Would have been a neat photo of the object would have taken up the whole frame and if it was in focus.
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 12/03/2008 06:45:40 PM
Seems a bit blown out, hard to really focus on. It may have helped getting rid of the blue in the top right, and making the pattern the sole object of the photo. interesting shot.
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 12/03/2008 05:38:42 PM
My eye tries to find a point to focus on in this photo but it all seems soft. I love abstract images such as this but I do think it needs a focus point. Also, the blue sky seems a little distracting. I would like to see the entire pattern in the photo.

Evan
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 12/02/2008 09:38:27 PM
An interesting image... I could use some contrast and some more focus, I think. (not voting yet)
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