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Empty in the Everglades
Empty in the Everglades
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Challenge: Proportion (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Minolta DiMAGE Xt
Location: Everglades National Park, Florida
Date: Apr 24, 2004
Date Uploaded: Apr 24, 2004

Taken of Dad on long canoe trip throught Everglades, Florida. Simple cropping done. Its a shame the horizon is titled.... maybe next time....

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Place: 227 out of 290
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05/03/2004 03:14:54 PM
You can use the ruler tool in Photoshop to fix the horizon line from being on an angle.
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05/03/2004 12:16:59 PM
I like it but I have two suggestions: fix horizon so it is level and include the rest of the subject and position him at 1/3.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/01/2004 01:38:53 PM
The horizon is slightly skewed. The vastness of the ocean and the insignificance of your subject shows good porportion. Also, the two different shades of blue really stand out nicely.
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05/01/2004 12:44:58 AM
uh oh....sloping lake.... good for water skiing :)
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04/29/2004 10:34:17 PM
oh - pet peeve of mine - straighten the horizon
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/29/2004 11:43:37 AM
Nice off-balanced composition. Horizon tilt is a bit of a problem, as are the cut off hands.
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04/29/2004 06:08:46 AM
I like the colours, a lot but what about the proportion, 3:1?
(all the pictures I've taken of my husband look like this: a hat, shades and beard, no face - not the photographer's fault though!)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/28/2004 05:14:49 PM
I kind of like this as a candid portrait but I don't see how it meets the challenge. I like the extreme of placing the subject to the very edge of the frame with the expanse of water and sky filling the rest. I guess in a way the composition demonstrates proportion. I think your title has thrown me off. Fill-flash would reveal more detail in the subject's face, although you might have lost that intriguing blur of his hand at the edge. Overall, I think it's an effective image.
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04/28/2004 07:40:43 AM
I'd like this better with a corrected horizon. Afraid it's a pet peeve of mine.
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