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Morning light - Bread and knife - Winter 2004.
Morning light - Bread and knife - Winter 2004.
jjbeguin


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Challenge: Mundane (Advanced Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-F828
Location: Verbier Switzerland
Date: Feb 19, 2004
Date Uploaded: Feb 21, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 17 out of 169
Avg (all users): 6.3750
Avg (commenters): 7.2857
Avg (participants): 6.3030
Avg (non-participants): 6.4918
Views since voting: 1333
Votes: 160
Comments: 23
Favorites: 1 (view)

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 11/12/2004 07:38:30 PM
*ghasp*! st-tut-tte-er.. wow.
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 03/01/2004 01:07:00 AM
I should have known that this was you JJ. Love the simplicity of subject and tonality of this shot. You have my vote for underrated shot of the challenge!

Yours
TC
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/29/2004 01:56:24 PM
While I like all the elements of the picture, (the subject, the arrangement, the textures, the monochrome treatment), here is what I think detracts from the whole. If you draw a line down the center, top to bottom, the right half has no real interest. It is just a continuation of elements from the left, and doesn't "become" a negative space. Having all the interest of the subject weighted to the left usually effects one's subconscious as darker, or awry, or discordant. A mental diconnect. This effect does not seem appropriate to the subject, and to my eye, detracts from the overall effectiveness of the picture. A different cropping might make all the difference.
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 02/29/2004 10:21:57 AM
like this is BW and my only nit would have been a slight change in your POV to your right and losing the bit of shadow on the upper left corner.
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 02/28/2004 08:03:39 PM
very nice tones - the layering works very well to make each ordinarily bland texture stand out
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 02/28/2004 12:38:54 PM
Lovely idea ... textures are strong.... however, I think it would be better with chair on a less busy background. (It doesn't stand out enough).
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 02/28/2004 09:55:01 AM
begs for color to make it interesting, the background, the chair, and the bread are nearly the same in color and texture
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 02/28/2004 05:26:22 AM
Wonderful textures and great toning.
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 02/27/2004 04:53:54 PM
Wow, this is great... definately a mundane subject that pops right off my screen! The subtle differences in texture between the floor, chair, and bread is what makes this an excellent photo IMO.
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 02/27/2004 09:18:34 AM
Exquisite tones, and an interesting point of view. Good balance too. This is super work. 10
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 02/27/2004 02:35:07 AM
I like it.
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 02/26/2004 11:30:09 PM
Great shot, nice POV and lighting. Excellent composition and texture contrast.
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 02/26/2004 06:35:53 PM
I'd feel a little worried to eat bread that was placed on something someone just had their behind on. Sorry. Very unattractive. If the picture had been taken from a closer pov, I probably wouldn't have known what it was actually on.
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 02/25/2004 12:19:04 PM
Very clever and very well done. Great lighting, contrast and focus.
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 02/25/2004 10:37:34 AM
Good shot - I like the framing of the chair. Works great in b&w.
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 02/24/2004 03:58:26 AM
The texture and contrast is excellent, but I find the framing a bit far to the left.
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 02/23/2004 09:00:33 PM
I like the old fashioned feel of this photo. nice work...
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 02/23/2004 06:45:05 PM
Would love to have seen this in the textures challenge as there are so many textures in this shot.
Just as fitting for this challenge..great clarity and lighting....9
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 02/23/2004 06:23:42 PM
this is quite awesome!
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 02/23/2004 03:11:55 PM
Excellent work. I love the shallow tonal range of gray in this image.
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 02/23/2004 12:20:16 PM
Very "JJ-esque". I like it a lot!
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 02/23/2004 12:02:08 PM
So beautiful! The textures in this shot are amazing and the composition is quite nice.
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 02/23/2004 10:14:41 AM
Great texture study
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