The lighting really helps convey the image of the figure behind the glass. If anything, I feel that there is a little too much of the doorframe to the right of the image.
Overall, a very nice photo. I like the subtle nature of the silhouette. I think it was right to include some of the shower door edge, but I find that I'm struggling a little bit with accepting the difference in the chrome versus the texture of the door with the silhouette. Maybe if there were a little less of the door edge. JMHO.
This shot is so well thought out. But, post processing the drama would be more focused if you cloned out the scratches and marks and the trim. They distract from your subject rather than frame it.
lose the door frame and just shoot through the glass and I'll give you a 10 - love this - almost. Seems like the whites could be a little brighter too. Great creative - 6