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02/23/2003 07:57:10 PM |
| To me it seems a little too "tossed together"... a little too random, even though there are numerous clocks involved. The railing that runs vertically along the right hand side is also a bit distracting. |
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02/20/2003 06:14:34 PM |
| The flash is very noticeable in the top right hand clock and the beam on the right I would have cropped out. But otherwise a good idea. |
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02/20/2003 01:37:59 PM |
| All the clocks make this a pretty busy shot, and my eye can't really figure out where to settle. Maybe just one of them would have been better. |
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02/19/2003 08:32:33 PM |
| The exposure seems too dark (especially on the upper right hand clock) and needs more contrast. Your center clock, because it is asymetrical itself, seems to throw off the balance of the shot (which I think is vital to this shot). The door frame on the right side should have been avoided. It seems the shot is also tilted to the left. The idea had some potential but the shot needs a lot of technical work. Good luck. 3 |
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02/19/2003 01:56:49 PM |
| I understand the 'rhythm' idea you were going for here, but the photograph doesn't really show the 'repeating pattern' idea... the contrast also seems to be just a bit weak... - setzler |
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02/17/2003 10:31:35 AM |
| All the pendulums--except one--are swinging in the same direction.This kind of breaks the rhythm. |
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