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02/26/2003 09:35:22 PM |
Greetings from the CC gang!
THEME: Yes the photo does have some rhthym but IMO adding a few more would've made a stronger impact. Maybe you didn't have any more. :-)
COMPOSITION: Having them with the same distance between them would create better rhythm as well. One is overlapping and is distracting to the eye. Remember that rhythm is all about symetry. Cropping is fine to me.
LIGHTING: It seems a bit underexposed. Maybe decreasing shutter speed or adding more light sources would've helped.
General feeling... unfortunately this shot doesn't have any WOW factor to me. It would not be a shot that I would print out and hang on my wall.
I hope this helps!
Yanik
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02/22/2003 01:41:09 PM |
| This is a nice abstract, but the lighting seems to be just a bit weak. I think it could possibly use a little extra sharpness as well :) - setzler |
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02/21/2003 03:31:50 PM |
| It's to hard to tell what it is... and not interesting enough to make not being able to tell what it is not important. :( |
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02/18/2003 08:53:14 PM |
| I like the contrast of the chrome and the black background. I would like to see more focuus and dept of field to make the subject crisper. Jacko |
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02/17/2003 06:55:06 PM |
| not too sure what it is....its a little too dark to makeout the subject |
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02/17/2003 02:09:23 AM |
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02/17/2003 12:42:43 AM |
| too dark to make out what the subject is. |
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