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			|  | 11/07/2004 04:51:47 PM | 
		| | Wonderful portrait!!! Lighting is great! | 
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			|  | 11/05/2004 05:50:41 PM | 
		| | She looks so fresh and pretty !!   I like the natural look of her pose. | 
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			|  | 11/03/2004 10:13:21 PM | 
		| | This is such an appealing shot.  Her smile, the look in her eyes, and the angle of her head all contribute to giving this shot a fresh, sweet quality. | 
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			|  | 11/02/2004 02:24:34 PM | 
		| | She has a sweet face, but I see some problems. Stay with me here, I'm not a pro but learned something along the way and I am trying to help you.
 If I am wrong just PM me and you can call me names :)
 
 My eyes go imidiatly to her nose, and I think that's not a good thing.
 I think you could have used a different focal lenght.
 If you stand further away from your model and zoom in this would be better.(hard to explain why in just a few words, if you like to know PM me)
 And try to focus on the eyes.
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			|  | 11/01/2004 02:51:41 PM | 
		| | Nice portrait - really shines with personality - Check the threads. there is one that talks about boosting the catchlight in the eyeballs which might improve this image. | 
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			|  | 11/01/2004 11:49:56 AM | 
		| | I dont know much about portraits so my opinions are completely personal preference. I like that you filled the entire frame with the frame. The hair and scarf do a good job of being a natural frame. Her expression seems natural and warm and comes across as genuine. There are no distracting shadows and the lighting is soft yet warm. Her eyes seem a little soft and dark - a little editing work and I think it would really raise the level of the portrait as the eyes seem to be one of the  main focal points. | 
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			|  | 11/01/2004 12:34:14 AM | 
		| | 7. This is a great portrait. | 
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