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Sweetness
02/06/2006 12:53:20 AM
Sweetness
by shanksware

Comment:
There's a lovely sensuality to this image.
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would i?
02/06/2006 12:49:52 AM
would i?
by madison461

Comment:
I don't think that I would.
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7
02/06/2006 12:47:48 AM
7
by magnus

Comment:
Is your title trying to subliminally elicit 7s from voters? It almost worked with me. I did find my finger veering towards the 7 key. It slipped one in the end, though.
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Saturday
02/06/2006 12:41:18 AM
Saturday
by taterbug

Comment:
What a very powerful image. I can really feel the heat and excitement of Saturday nights.
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Spies
02/06/2006 12:30:41 AM
Spies
by cpanaioti

Comment:
I wonder if the image would have been strengthened if the bottom layer was removed and you had focused more on the faces above? I like the idea here.
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Pastel...
02/06/2006 12:29:32 AM
Pastel...
by agwright

Comment:
Lovely layout and a very pleasing sense of peace here. Nice work.
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Rule of Thirds
02/06/2006 12:27:48 AM
Rule of Thirds
by JRalston

Comment:
The topic and the treatment is too bland to attract me, sorry.
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Alchemy and Chaos
02/06/2006 12:27:09 AM
Alchemy and Chaos
by Jean

Comment:
Nice design, but the softness works against the clarity needed for the shapes.
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Disappearing Curves
02/06/2006 12:26:30 AM
Disappearing Curves
by jerowe

Comment:
I like the design, but I feel that the image lacks pop.
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Finding the lost Ark
02/03/2006 12:42:56 PM
Finding the lost Ark
by crayon

Comment:
***greetings from the critique club***

(I'm writing these comments before reading the score and the other comments.)

I find the image quite interesting and reasonably well done. I don't, however, find it that compelling and would have given it a 5 in the challenge. I'll explain why.

For an image to appeal to me, I need a number of factors to work in coordination. The first is theme. The second is content, and the third is technique. Of course, there is a clear overlap between these factors, they can be discussed independantly.

The challenge theme is fantasy. Beyond your title, I can't see much evidence of that, sorry. I see well-carved engravings which might be enstrued as fantastic, or as magical instructions. I can't see, however, any evidence that they should be. A single element photograph requires that element to be very strong. Your subject is strong but not strong enough to win at DPC, I fear. If the engravings had some encodable text, you would find some audience.

The contents of the photo are the most important aspect of photography, an understatement perhaps. What do you have in this frame?

You have a light reflection at the top, a tomb (?) inscription running from left top to bottom, an amber brick section on the bottom right and a shadow cutting into the tomb.

How do these elements combine? I like the intersection of the shadows on the stone. They add a mystique. The black section on the right is very large. I wonder if it helps the photo?

Overall, the technique is good, but the subject and elements are not that special. I'd give the photo a solid 5.

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