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Finding the lost Ark
Finding the lost Ark
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Fantasy (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S5600Z
Location: an old fortress
Date: Jan 21, 2006
Galleries: Black and White, Rural
Date Uploaded: Jan 22, 2006

I like how the light and shadows got reflected on the stone tablets. Gives the stones a very peaceful and undisturbed feeling.

Statistics
Place: 49 out of 109
Avg (all users): 5.5092
Avg (commenters): 7.2500
Avg (participants): 5.1791
Avg (non-participants): 5.6176
Views since voting: 889
Views during voting: 402
Votes: 271
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


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02/03/2006 12:42:56 PM
***greetings from the critique club***

(I'm writing these comments before reading the score and the other comments.)

I find the image quite interesting and reasonably well done. I don't, however, find it that compelling and would have given it a 5 in the challenge. I'll explain why.

For an image to appeal to me, I need a number of factors to work in coordination. The first is theme. The second is content, and the third is technique. Of course, there is a clear overlap between these factors, they can be discussed independantly.

The challenge theme is fantasy. Beyond your title, I can't see much evidence of that, sorry. I see well-carved engravings which might be enstrued as fantastic, or as magical instructions. I can't see, however, any evidence that they should be. A single element photograph requires that element to be very strong. Your subject is strong but not strong enough to win at DPC, I fear. If the engravings had some encodable text, you would find some audience.

The contents of the photo are the most important aspect of photography, an understatement perhaps. What do you have in this frame?

You have a light reflection at the top, a tomb (?) inscription running from left top to bottom, an amber brick section on the bottom right and a shadow cutting into the tomb.

How do these elements combine? I like the intersection of the shadows on the stone. They add a mystique. The black section on the right is very large. I wonder if it helps the photo?

Overall, the technique is good, but the subject and elements are not that special. I'd give the photo a solid 5.

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/29/2006 10:30:26 PM
A very dramatic capture. Bumping up.
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01/27/2006 08:14:56 AM
the image is taken at a great angle where you can capturethe silhouette of the window.
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01/26/2006 07:43:31 PM
Wonderful lighting
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01/23/2006 03:48:10 PM
such emotion and feel in this
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01/23/2006 01:42:30 PM
I do love the lighting in this photo, but I would like to see how it looks in B&W as well. Good thought. 7
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