Flight
by sns

Comment:
I am not too pleased with this picture. First of all, the link to the theme is razor thin. Seems like you shot a nice pic and try to squeeze it in. Second, your horizon is not horizontal, makes viewers feel very uneasy. On top of that, the pic is quite noisy, probably due to oversharping, as it is a daylight pic without an apparant need for high ISO values. (3)

San Francisco Love Fest!
by Blue Moon

Comment:
Nice clear image, with vivid colours. The pink hair is slightly blown out and I am not that sure that the focus is spot on in this image. Furthermore, I see a lot of distracting things in the back. (5)

sisterly love.
by amandapaige119

Comment:
Pretty girls in a pretty environment, waht more do you need to get a good picture? Well, light to start with. All the eyes are in the shade and the girls cast shades upon themselves and each other. Please be more aware of the direction of the sun and use a fill flash to soften shadows. Also, be more aware of disturbing objects in the background, lik half boats (or clone them out, it's advanced editing). Nice holiday pic, but not a very good group portrait. (4)

... I Do!
by edmeng

Comment:
Nice wedding picture. I am sorry to say I think wedding pictures are boring. Furthermore, I feel that your picture is capturing an event, instead of taking a portrait. It's a thin line, I know, but let me explain. I do not like that the guy's back is so much in the picture. In an event registration, that's fine, the guy is functional. In a portrait of the wedding couple, he's misplaced. The same holds for the woman we see between bride and groom. Behind the bride we see a shoulder that makes the bride looks like she has huge and funny boobs. (4)

together we can
by maymay

Comment:
I think you might have a nice concept here, but it is so dark I can hardly recognize anything. (3)

Thirteen miles to go
by fredandaud

Comment:
nice capture, but the picture is a bit crowded, giving it a snapshottish feel. The camera angle doesn't help either. (4)

Symphony in Rehearsal
by banmorn

Comment:
Sorry, this does not work for me. Too many things happening in one picture and a registration rather than a portrait imo. (5)

Will Monkeys Do?
by GeneralE

Comment:
good thinking, but I would have liked it more if you had given some more thought to setting and background. (6)

profiles
by sigrun_th

Comment:
Nice overall picture, but I would have liked the girls to behave more like a group. Their movements are more or less incidental with respect to each other. (6)

Is everybody ready?
by sniper

Comment:
No, they are not! Which is fun and makes the picture somewhat special (6)