Tammy
by bongo

Comment:
You have lighting , composition and catchlights in here eyes. All is good. I would guess you have a studio and you sell your portraits.

Attitude
by postoakinversion

Comment:
The dramatic look is great, but I would have liked to have seen just a bit more of the left side of his face. It could be my monitor, but all I see there is a pin point of light from his eye and it is distracting instead of adding value.

Autumn Slumber
by kendall6

Comment:
Beautiful lighting and colors. Reminds me of another challenge photo. Great concept and executed to perfect. Love to here about your lighting set up. 10

Sleepy Jaxon
by lentil

Comment:
Soft , sweet, and closeup. All good.

Tiny Dancer
by xylke

Comment:
The focus should be on her eyes to really make this photo stand out. The color and composition are good.

Spiderfan
by arsharif

Comment:
I feel the background has ruined an otherwise excellent portrait. The color and texture are clashing with the young man's shirt. The flash is bouncing harshly off the wall to his right and casting a little more shadow than needs to be on his right. To avoid unwanted shadows, it's usually best to have your subject several feet away from the background.

Emma Louise
by Fleximus

Comment:
This has the makings of a good profile. The eyes are not turned too far away as some do, but the background is rather distracting and it bothers me that you cut the photo off mid way of her cheek. This is a case where seeing an ear or some hair would have been welcome. You feel like you have been left hanging here with something missing. Exposure and light are great. Very natural feeling.

Brianna
by nico_blue

Comment:
Normally I don't care for the eyes to be turned that far away, but it works in this case. This could come from a magazine. Very glamorous. You might want to move her out a little from the backdrop if you don't want the shadow.

His Royal Highness
by bandit

Comment:
Couldn't get his highness to look at you, huh? Nice portrait. Owner should be proud. Lighting was extra good.

Sitting On the Top Bleacher
by CLarson557

Comment:
The only thing that I don't like about this photo is the sunglasses. The reflection isn't adding any value to the photo. Great everything else.