After a days play
by hoffy

Comment:
Cute baby! Love the eyelashes.

Midwestern Girl
by bbmohr

Comment:
I love this photo. Great perspective. She has such a "real" look about her. I bet it's great in color too! 9

Black & White Portrait
by bigshock

Comment:
Your lighting is a bit harsh here. 5

Alo's Pride
by aliqui

Comment:
I would find a better setting for this portrait or change the perspective. There's not much flattering about a sewer.

Hope
by Kita

Comment:
Very nice. 9

Me, Myself & I
by tkoonce

Comment:
Nice lighting & composition. 7 You might want to read this tutorial (//www.dpchallenge.com/tutorial.php?TUTORIAL_ID=26) on how to size your photos for a challenge. Some people can be pretty harsh on small photos.

Lost
by EBJones

Comment:
Very nice. 10

Trym
by erl89end

Comment:
What an adorable little model you have! To me, a portrait is all about the eyes... you want them to be in as sharp a focus as possible & the face is a little soft here. The tree provides a great setting, but the doppled shadows are distracting. It would look better if you could use a diffuser (a white sheet, perhaps) to block the sun and cause less shadowing. Also, you want to look for things like your shadow in the bottom right corner - next time, if you see your shadow, move your body or change your perspective until your shadow is no longer there. Hope these help a little!

'the entertainer'
by suemack

Comment:
Fun!

I am, I said
by alfresco

Comment:
Nice conversion.