Black & Blue Scratch
by danh669

Comment:
Greetings Newbie from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

For reference I'll add a little "veteran's" point of view advice that you can take or leave.

Composition - Difficult to interpret what the heck I was looking at. I see now, but it took a combination of what I was seeing and the title to eventually come to the conclusion that it was pocket billiards and not just some abstract stuff. (clarity of subject is very important to the large majority of DPC voters, myself included). This is a good idea and meets the challenge. Using the approach you've taken I'd have turned it slightly to make it symmetric. The light showing thru at the bottom of the pocket is a great touch. I think it should've been the selling point of this photo. The overall color tone of the pic is good.

Technical - I think this photo would've scored substantially higher if the aperture were about F11 or so to bring the ball more in focus, if not totally focused. It would've capitalized on the light showing thru the side of the pocket. The ball is pretty blurry. (Even soft focus on DPC is generally frowned upon by most of the newer members) The exposure is great and the framing is pretty close. It doesn't look like a lot of processing was done, which generally means you did a very good job, or that you didn't do much to the photo.

Overall - I can see why this did poorly by the difficult time I had determining what I was even looking at. Voters, myself included, don't have several minutes to try to sit and determine what every subject is like I did here tonight. Abstract photos are actually acceptable if you put "abstract" somewhere in the title. If not, it's assumed that you just don't know what you're doing and your photo obviously sucks :) . There is a lot for folks like me, who start as virtual novices, to learn about photography. Hopefully this gives you a little insight into what we, the voting public, are looking for and how we are looking at it. My recipe is Clarity of Subject, Consistent with Topic, and Creativity. Anyway, there's my 2 cents. Welcome to DPC and good luck with future challenges. - Inspzil

Whisk
by lisae

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - Whisks are good photographic subjects. I think something is lost though from this extreme short distance. The properties of whisks that I personally find appealing in terms of photography are the lines of the wires and the regularity of the pattern they form on the whole. This close sort of obscures that regularity so that it sort of looks like a jumble of wires. I wish the background was flat. The little texture there isn't really hurting anything, but I don't prefer it to plain and flat. The highlights left from the flash are too intense. What I do like about this photo is the contrast between the bottom wires and the counter top and the bottom wires and the top wires. I like how the top ones are very bright (too bright in some cases) and the bottom ones are all but black. This is a great effect to show in a single utensil. Nice work there.

Technical - Well taken macro. DOF is pretty great so that most of this is in focus. I don't know what the F-number is so its hard to make any association without exif data. Whatever the case, I like the technique and the black and white works well for this photo.

Overall - Not a bad photo. Nothing extraordinary either. Well taken, but I'm not sold on the overall composition although there are some qualities that are very attractive. I think the score pretty much conveys my feelings about the photo, were I to quantify it. Hope this could be of a little help to you. Maybe natural light and a longer exposure would've done you better than the flash. Good luck with your future challenges mate - Inspzil

Spoon Star
by nathaliedoo

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - I really like the composition of this photograph and probably why it was one of my highest rated. The framing is very good and the color is nice. The extra reflections in the spoons is a little distracting, but tolerable at worst. Great idea and well executed.

Technical - Very well taken photo. Nice and sharp with great exposure. No obvious processing flaws or compression problems.

Overall - This may be the shortest critique I've ever written. I really liked the photo and scored it well. The only thing I think that could've been better is omitting the reflections from the spoons, especially of the photographer :) I really like this photo. Great job and thanks for sharing it with us. Keep up the good work and Bon Chance! - Inspzil

Planet Earth from an altitude of 5.58 feet
by swaroskji

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - Well I think above and beyond everything, it was the composition part that dragged you down. There really isn't anything of interest here and you've done a great job portraying that. The one thing that I think you could've improved upon in this composition is having a little focal point. I find myself wanting to focus on the cigarette butt at the top of the frame. I think that could be an effective focal point for the viewers if placed in the right strategic spot, I'd go for the top right 3rd. But really the bigger problem is that there just isn't anything to see here of photographic interest.

Technical - I can't say the photo is poorly taken, it isn't. It isn't exceptionally well taken either though. The exposue is good, the DOF is right. It is pretty clear.

Overall - This photo is a bit lacking in subject matter. Maybe this photo is lacking in subject altogether. The voters were pretty harsh with this one and honestly I don't blame them. The best thing about this photo is definitely the clever title. The rest of it is pretty easy to come by. sorry I couldn't be of much assistance on this photo. Good luck in your future challenges. - Inspzil

Weeds
by one66stang

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - Well I see you're somewhere warmer than where I am. We just got rid of the last of our snow and have had milder temperatures for just a few days. Oh the critique, right. The composition of this photo is good. It isn't strong, or extraordinary, but there is nothing wrong with it. I like the background with this shallow DOF. There is a little color here and there to break up any monotony you might have. With the subject you chose, I think you did pretty well. The top flower looks like it might be a little washed out.

Technical - For a macro, its a little soft. I think that might be fixable with a sharpen or two. It might also be a result of the ISO set at 400. Color looks great. DOF is good and exposure is maybe just a touch too long. Nothing really out of place though.

Overall - The composition is good, but really lacks the "wow" factor. The photo is pretty well taken but I think I'd have set the ISO to 100 or less. Nothing about that picture is really wrong, but it doesn't have that little extra that'd make it stand apart from the rest. Hope that helps at least a little. Good luck on future challenges.

Looking down on San Antonio
by xertion

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - The cityscape of San Antonio... This is not a bad picture, but a little, ordinary, for lack of a better word. I think that as far as these types of shots go, it is a better bet to have something as a strong focal point for the viewers. Even an ominous sky can sometimes work sometimes. There really isn't anything wrong with the picture, just lacking some interest I think. I wish the sky was all nice and blue like it is on the right side, but you can't have everyting I know. That flat looking complex at the bottom of the frame I think could've been cut out and we wouldn't miss it. Maybe if you changed the aspect a bit and made it more of a panorama type shot... but generally those shots do not do well on dpc. It just needs something to give it a little of the "wow" factor.

Technical - Not badly taken. Could be a little more sharp but it isn't really soft or anything. Looks a pinch overexposed. That might help the sky out a little too by making it a little more blue.

Overall - This is a difficult picture to critique because it really doesn't have anything WRONG with it. There isn't a whole lot you can change about it to make a substantial improvement without rethinking the composition again. Maybe it would be better to concentrate on one block of buildings as opposed to the whole cityscape. Sorry I don't have more advice to offer on this one. If you could just make it worse I could talk more and feel more important :P Good luck in the future challenges. - Inspzil

Bouquet
by magnetic9999

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

I wrote one for this picture earlier this morning, but I'm not sure what happened to it so I guess I'm doing it again.

Composition - Great line leading into the vase with the cheese grater thing. That was the first thing I saw when I looked at this pic. The best thing about this pic that I like is the color of the receptacle. I'm not sure I like the little table there. It looks like it could be a fuzz off the horizon. This is very simple but has some very good qualities that make it compositionally strong including the geometry and the way the utensils are silhouetted.

Technical - Well taken, as always. The one thing that gets my attention is the funky diagonal lines where the whisk wires meet the handle. Doesn't look like anything wrong that you did, but maybe it was the resizing of the picture didn't agree with it. Aside from that, everything else looks pretty darn good.

Overall - Simple, but well done. Excellent picture quality. Good lines and shapes. Like the framing and exposure. Nice work. Good luck in future challenges - BoB

Whisk Bouquet
by Gracious

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - This sort of reminds me of a flower macro. Its a good idea. I think it definitely meets the challenge. In terms of composition, there are a couple things that come to mind right away that catch my attention. The framing seems sort of crowded. What I think for this image is that the "flower" should start further to the left and open up to the wider side. In this photo, it starts about center and crowds the right side of the photo. Also they seem to be pointing a little down from vertical where I think they would look better pointing up a little. I think a lot of my varying ideas of perception regarding this shot are going under the assumption that this is simulating a blossom. As always with my CC stuff, take what you think is viable and ditch the rest :)

Technical - Well lit and well exposed. Focus is pretty good but it looks a little oversharpened to me. It looks like it might be a little grainy too which would be a distinct side effect of being oversharpened. The other processing looks pretty good.

Overall - Well conceived. There are a couple things I tweak in this image regarding the framing of this photo. I really like the light and the yellow color. Hope this could be of some help to you. Good luck in future challenges. - Inspzil

Pasta
by FranziskaLang

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - Very nice decorative variety of pastas arranged neatly on what appears to be a picture frame. This is meeting the challenge very well. The thin spaghetti does a wonderful job of providing leading lines into the picture frame. The first time I saw this during voting that spaghetti, for whatever reason, really reminded me of the sun's rays showing through the window except the sun itself is not visible. I think this quality was the appeal of this photo for me. The spaghetti acts as a sort of border between the mostaccioli noodles and the macaroni noodles. Well conceived by whomever thunk it up. Well executed by you.

Technical - Very well taken photo. Exposure could've been just a little more to give the 3 darker sides of the frame just a bit more light. This is a very nice crisp clear photo though. The kind a well trained Nikon user should take :) I don't see anything unusual about the way this was taken or the post processing. Very nicely done.

Overall - Well set up and well taken photo. The spaghetti makes this picture in my eyes. It acts as a divider and a path for the viewer to follow from the bottom corner right on up into the midst of the noodles. Despite not being your idea, I think it definitely deserves the score it got for great execution. Nice job. Keep up the good work and good luck in future challenges. - Bob

Juggling
by DougPaz

Comment:
Is this the new thing at Foot Locker? :)