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04/01/2003 10:19:52 AM |
| I see your a bridesmaid again. But I really like this shot |
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03/25/2003 04:43:15 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Very nice decorative variety of pastas arranged neatly on what appears to be a picture frame. This is meeting the challenge very well. The thin spaghetti does a wonderful job of providing leading lines into the picture frame. The first time I saw this during voting that spaghetti, for whatever reason, really reminded me of the sun's rays showing through the window except the sun itself is not visible. I think this quality was the appeal of this photo for me. The spaghetti acts as a sort of border between the mostaccioli noodles and the macaroni noodles. Well conceived by whomever thunk it up. Well executed by you.
Technical - Very well taken photo. Exposure could've been just a little more to give the 3 darker sides of the frame just a bit more light. This is a very nice crisp clear photo though. The kind a well trained Nikon user should take :) I don't see anything unusual about the way this was taken or the post processing. Very nicely done.
Overall - Well set up and well taken photo. The spaghetti makes this picture in my eyes. It acts as a divider and a path for the viewer to follow from the bottom corner right on up into the midst of the noodles. Despite not being your idea, I think it definitely deserves the score it got for great execution. Nice job. Keep up the good work and good luck in future challenges. - Bob
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03/23/2003 11:41:45 PM |
| Unique! Nicely done. The framing was a great idea. |
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03/22/2003 01:59:18 PM |
| Good job thinking "outside the box" |
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03/20/2003 04:17:22 AM |
| Very nice composition and idea, but the lighting is very flat. With lighting more low across the paste you could have added atmosphere with nice highlights and shadows. |
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03/19/2003 03:55:18 PM |
| Such a simple shot. The diagonal pasta really adds interest and dynamics to this! |
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03/19/2003 11:01:13 AM |
| cute idea. gives your shot kind of a 3d effect. focus and clarity are great. lighting is excelent. very nice lighting on the pasta. no distracting shadows or hot spots. I like the angle and framing/cropping you chose for this. very creative and original. good luck in the challenge. |
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03/19/2003 08:41:28 AM |
| excellent shot.. the lighting is perfect and the strong diagonal adds a nice touch... - setzler |
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03/19/2003 01:20:56 AM |
| Very nice. I like this very much. The spaghetti protruding in a diagonal beyond the frame is a great touch. This image is full of texture and interest without being overwhelming. Good work! One of my faves this week. |
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03/18/2003 04:38:15 PM |
| Good concept and composition. A bit more light would have been nice. 8 |
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03/18/2003 03:35:47 PM |
| Enter your comment here, and then cast your vote...Simple but dramatic! Nicely done to meet the challenge. |
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03/18/2003 03:49:07 AM |
| Very well composed, I just love this photo. It's one of my favourites for this challenge, you have set up the lighting perfectly here. |
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03/17/2003 10:45:59 PM |
| Light efect 8,idea 10,focus crop 10, 9 from me! |
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03/17/2003 07:35:43 PM |
| I'm betting that your pasta arrangement will beat my pasta arrangement :) nice work! |
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03/17/2003 03:58:31 PM |
Nice pattern to the Pasta, Nice color, overall.
Good focus,
Visual impact is okay,
Suggestion: I would have tried some coloured pasta's
Good idea though. |
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03/17/2003 10:44:18 AM |
| That's a nice twist on pasta. Good lighting, color. |
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03/17/2003 08:18:47 AM |
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03/17/2003 04:23:38 AM |
| Wow, beatiful. Great Composition |
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03/17/2003 01:12:09 AM |
| I really like the angle on this! It's very clever and very appealing- the colors work great together - very warm and inviting. |
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