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03/25/2003 11:21:20 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Well I think above and beyond everything, it was the composition part that dragged you down. There really isn't anything of interest here and you've done a great job portraying that. The one thing that I think you could've improved upon in this composition is having a little focal point. I find myself wanting to focus on the cigarette butt at the top of the frame. I think that could be an effective focal point for the viewers if placed in the right strategic spot, I'd go for the top right 3rd. But really the bigger problem is that there just isn't anything to see here of photographic interest.
Technical - I can't say the photo is poorly taken, it isn't. It isn't exceptionally well taken either though. The exposue is good, the DOF is right. It is pretty clear.
Overall - This photo is a bit lacking in subject matter. Maybe this photo is lacking in subject altogether. The voters were pretty harsh with this one and honestly I don't blame them. The best thing about this photo is definitely the clever title. The rest of it is pretty easy to come by. sorry I couldn't be of much assistance on this photo. Good luck in your future challenges. - Inspzil |
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03/23/2003 09:27:35 PM |
| I like the texture of your photo. |
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03/23/2003 05:45:31 PM |
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03/23/2003 05:21:51 PM |
| Well composed, interesting light, and I love the shoes. Lines and angles add to the interest here. |
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03/22/2003 07:50:51 PM |
| Enter your comment here, and then cast your vote...Two small steps for. . . Great idea. Wished the landing site were more interesting. |
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03/22/2003 03:36:30 PM |
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03/20/2003 04:45:36 PM |
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03/19/2003 05:49:48 PM |
| Nice composition; I think the presence of the feet detract from your shot, though. |
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03/19/2003 12:06:32 PM |
| Wonderful! Full in focus, excellent composition and very funny title to boot! |
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03/19/2003 01:58:30 AM |
| Hahaha, pretty good. And the measurement is so precise!! |
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03/18/2003 07:46:31 PM |
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03/18/2003 02:45:22 PM |
| good picture and nice idea |
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03/18/2003 02:15:07 PM |
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03/18/2003 02:12:28 PM |
| nice use of color and light to the picture. |
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03/18/2003 10:15:19 AM |
| very nice, would be better with out the toes though. |
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03/18/2003 09:05:53 AM |
| At 5.58 feet, I'm sure there are a lot of better shots can be made from. |
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03/18/2003 07:57:38 AM |
| Great title, lol! Very simple but superb detail, good to see you caught your feet in there too, gives a real sense of scale. |
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03/17/2003 03:10:45 PM |
| Would have liked it better without the feet |
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03/17/2003 12:39:49 PM |
| looks like you took it by mistake.lol |
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03/17/2003 09:53:19 AM |
| Oh no! You stepped on a crack. Great idea. |
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