Boxed in Pup
by kidchico

Comment:
Well, it's different! Maybe you could have cropped it down a bit more as IMO the OOF hands are distracting when you can see the grass clearly!

Keep an eye on the kids
by Prof_Fate

Comment:
The 'frame' seems a little distrackting by being both OOF and also in front of the subjects. Maybe a better vantage point could have been used?

But I like the photo - the colouring is nice, the closeness of the kids. It appeals to me.

Seeing Triple
by LittleGreenKat

Comment:
It was a good idea but could have been executed slightly better.

Perhaps a different background - maybe with just a sky or something rather than the distracting dark lines of the house.

Maybe you could have made the whole picture slightly more in focus rather than simply focusing on the glasses and the models hand? Just a thought as maybe the soft background was what you were going for?

Multiple Personalities
by wickedpete

Comment:
Critique Club Comment:

Congrats on being in the top 20!

It's a fun photo with good colours but there are a few more comments I'd like to make:

- The right hand side does seem to be a little brighter than the left and there is also a bit of brightness by the knees in both poses.

- Could have possibly been a bit sharper, esp around the faces.

- Composition could have been slightly better - maybe a little more space between the two poses as they feel a bit close.

All in all, I think it's a wonderful photo; inovative and well executed.

The World Through A World
by joebok

Comment:
The 'thing' at the top of this photo is quite distracting but I love the reflections and the contrast that you got at the bottom left between the subject and the background.

Serenity
by gaurawa

Comment:
Seems a little skewed? Or maybe it's just the perspective given by the tunnel .. .

Nice focus on both objects in the photo.

Hope
by DianaB

Comment:
Lovely photo with good composition.

hope against hope
by whiteroom

Comment:
A little too grainy for a shot like this IMO.

Breathing life
by sanandan

Comment:
Looks like a fantastic shot. Is there glass or something in the background? Can see some flecks on the right hand side.

Irony
by RedOak

Comment:
I love the lighting in this shot - dark, but no too dark. Really sets a mood.