Princess Audrey
by Man_Called_Horse

Comment:
i think you've done a great job of capturing her head strongness. many probably won't like the soft focus on the face...i find it very intriguing, once again adding to the personality of the shot. i think that asphalt line could have been problematic, but your choice of composition has handled it well...i find it very complementary to her eyes.

Fox Tower War Memorial.
by JunieMoon

Comment:
good idea. i would have exposed more for the sky...it feels a bit blown out to me. and i don't think the stone work would have been hurt by a bit more underexposure. if you had the ability to change your aperture, i think it would have been nice to increase it and throw the trees as out of focus as possible or tighten it so everything was crisp. though i understand how hard it is to judge something like that looking at the camera's screen

A Celebration of Freedom
by Node

Comment:
at first i was concerned the last plane was a bit lagging. but the more i look, the more I enjoy the fact that his position breaks up the monotony of the shot...well maybe not. anyway perhaps a bit more saturation or contrast could have helped pump up this shot a bit for me.

Fisherman at Dusk
by Bear_Music

Comment:
nice composition and feel to this shot. i wish the colors were a bit more subdued. perhaps a nice warm colored duotone would really enhance the feeling of the moment. but what do i know i've never done duotone coloring before. the leading line to the fisherman is quite nice as well. the more i look, the more that stick in the foreground bothers me...perhaps you could have broke it off...i'll stop now.

Out And About Again
by lshles

Comment:
great idea. i want to really like this, but i'm having alot of trouble with being up too close and having the walker missing a side. i think this might have worked better at this angle with a cane...not that you had those kind of options at your disposal. i'm seeing straight on with both hands on each side in sharp focus and the subject blurred in the background. but it is your art, so good job it got me to stop and think. nice focus btw.

More Alternatives
by Kathe

Comment:
good crisp focus. unfortunately, it brings out alot of what appears to be dust issues. i would have liked to not have the main subject upside down as it makes it hard to look at for me. he looks like he staring off in a longing sort of way. perhaps you could have used that in a composition to more inhance your point, other than just all of the currency itself

The Ceremony is Over, So let the Party Begin
by twm122

Comment:
perhaps you're joking or perhaps they've been fitted with a one of those newer, slimmer, more portable ball and chains. as far as the pic goes, the focus is nice on the flowers though i'm not sure that should be the main attraction. maybe a smaller ap and stepping back to get everything in focus would help for me. also too bad you had such a distracting background to work with

Brothers and Best Friends
by L1

Comment:
nice emotion. i like how 1 is blurred and 1 is focused. perhaps it mirrors their personalities. his eyes looking off are great, unfortunately i'm drawn to the brother's hand on his back, which is cool but seems to distruct the balance of the image and pull me away from the center...since the embrace is an intricate part of the feeling, perhaps cropping down the right side to the ear would help things bleed off the page on the right as you have done on every other side, and rebalance the image...at least for me. I realize these are some overly critical comments for what will undoubtably be a very well received image...sorry...nice capture.

Gretchen, Mark, Rosie Jack — 3 Generations in Sunset Light
by Bear_Music

Comment:
great exposure and focus. i understand what you were going for but the bg looks a bit fake, perhaps due to the tough editing around their heads. if only 1 person where to look at the camera, i would have liked it to be the focal point or in your case, the baby

Sunday Afternoon on the Boardwalk
by Di

Comment:
if this is your family i'm confused. you have 2 wonderful models and you have chosen to take a pic of them doing a rather odd exercise. why not have them walking down the boardwalk, perhaps with her on his shoulders, perhaps blurring out the background around them (if possible with your lense) to focus on their togetherness...just a thought