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07/29/2005 12:32:54 AM |
** Greetings from the Critique Club **
The planes are a bit too far away - seems like at that distance you would need a stronger telephoto lens to really catch the detail of the planes, and thus increase interest. Being this far away leaves to much empty space.
Compositionally - I would have liked to see the last plane while it was still at the top, or just coming off the top of it's loop to give the feeling it was breaking free of the formation - thus being independent.
Sky color is well captured, as are the smoke trails from the planes.
- Linda |
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07/23/2005 09:43:44 PM |
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07/21/2005 10:36:33 PM |
| at first i was concerned the last plane was a bit lagging. but the more i look, the more I enjoy the fact that his position breaks up the monotony of the shot...well maybe not. anyway perhaps a bit more saturation or contrast could have helped pump up this shot a bit for me. |
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07/18/2005 08:55:27 PM |
| Nice composition and the colour of the sky is so refreshing :) 6 |
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07/17/2005 12:02:00 PM |
| Not quite as impactful if they'd been in closer fiew. Overall a nice shot and the colors are well done. |
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07/17/2005 12:26:36 AM |
| If the 4th flyer was leaving the formation, it would really scream independence! |
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