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D&L - Denim & Lace
08/30/2005 02:24:51 AM
D&L - Denim & Lace
by Mary Ann Melton

Comment:
This appears to be slightly out of focus. The shot would be more interesting if the depicted items were being modeled by someone. I would have preferred a macro shot of the two fabrics to this.
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Death & Love
08/30/2005 02:19:51 AM
Death & Love
by dewed

Comment:
This strikes me as a little morbid, and the photo itself more photojournalistic than I generally like for challenge entries. The misplaced focal point wouldn't have worked against you so much if the pillow weren't so detailed. Since this was an advanced editing challenge you might have been better off testing the "major elements" clause in the rules by cloning out the pillow to match the wall.
dark and lonely
08/30/2005 02:16:05 AM
dark and lonely
by drz01

Comment:
Both the composition and the focus directed my attention toward the object supporting the bed, which is presumably not the intended focal point. Gentle backlight above and behind the kid's head would have helped this shot.
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dimes&limes
08/30/2005 02:13:32 AM
dimes&limes
by mycelium

Comment:
The DoF is a little too shallow; the only items turned toward the camera are out of focus. I think that a less centered composition would have worked a little better here. The other limes surrounding the focal fruit are a nice touch.
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Desolate & Lonely
08/30/2005 02:10:25 AM
Desolate & Lonely
by dahkota

Comment:
This looks a little oversharpened. I love the leading lines and the illumination. I'd like to see a little more detail in the figure. I like the setting, but having your model so well illuminated works against the somber mood that you were aiming for.
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Diary & landscape
08/30/2005 02:07:09 AM
Diary & landscape
by gisli

Comment:
The cows seem somewhat under-exposed. This tutorial might help you to bring out more of the detail in the foreground.
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Desaturate & Levels
08/30/2005 02:04:30 AM
Desaturate & Levels
by mpemberton

Comment:
I find the residual color present in the shadow of the boat distracting. I think that a less center-heavy composition would have worked better.
relax
08/29/2005 01:31:43 AM
relax
by irishempress

Comment:
Thanks for sharing this with us. This was one of my favorite photos in the challenge.
Photographer found comment helpful.
First Nude
08/28/2005 09:14:42 PM
First Nude
by phylsy7

Comment:
The focus is a little off; the lines cutting through the mirror have the sharpest focus. This shot could benefit from increasing the contrast. Since there aren't any strong textures here I think that the color version of this shot may have had more impact. The shot is well framed, and I like the tattoos.
fruit of our labor
08/28/2005 09:10:13 PM
fruit of our labor
by Seanachai

Comment:
It looks like you went a little overboard on the USM; otherwise this was nicely executed.
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