remember II
by Alicia

Comment by Retroesque:
Oh yeah - I can see that!

Sneaky Pie
by Alicia

Comment by whiteroom:
this is so cool, free, uncontrived..

Sneaky Pie
by Alicia

Comment by pjangel:
Great poem to go with a great picture....

remember
by Alicia

Comment by idp:
Intriguing again - you obviously like disrupting expectations with these - so - i don't like the balance between the frames, i don't like the typeface or the colours or the layout - and i don't like the image, which i feel has no bearing whatever on the text

overall i really like the image as a whole !!! it has an uneasy feeling, like a joke that i don't fully understand - i feel excluded by it - but fascinated

good work

Dunes
by Alicia

Comment by idp:
here is a place of disaffection - time before and time after in a dim light

or

i must go down to the sea again
to the land of sea and sky
i left my shirt and socks there
i wonder if they're dry

both good possibilities - i like this picture - its got a spiriot of exploration - man against the kalahari - kind of feelibng

Prayer to Persephone
by Alicia

Comment by idp:
Interesting effect - bleached and slightly scratchy - it works well with this image

How now, spirit! Whither wander you?
by Alicia

Comment by idp:
swifter than the moon's sphere and i do serve the fairy queen to dew her orbs upon the green. There you go - and from memeory too although I can't prove it. I like the papery effect here - not sure that the poetry fits it

Sneaky Pie
by Alicia

Comment by roz:
LOVE THE POEM .. !!
simple and easy to read !! ..
love your photograph and that processing .. i was wondering wot the stuff hanging down was when i saw this as a thumb .. i thought it was like a ghost or something and when i opened this i didnt notice the cat right away .. my eye was drawn to the ghostly shape & i was wondering if it was supposed to be a cat !! .. then of course i saw the cat .. & realised the ghostly shape were leaves .. !! :)

remember II
by Alicia

Comment by roz:
i actually preferred the red & white on black .. but they are definitely my colours .. this is great too of course .. !! .. just different and more muted ... :)

Message edited by author 2008-05-12 16:55:36.

Sneaky Pie
by Alicia

Comment by Art Roflmao:
On the prowl huh? Very cool processing!
eta: I forgot to mention I almost missed the cat completely on first glance. :)

Message edited by author 2008-05-12 14:56:36.