remember
by Alicia

Comment by Kelli:
Maybe I read too many crime/murder/drama books, but this reminds me of a scene where the relatives have been called into the "viewing" room at a morgue. They are standing in front of the glass, with the stark overhead lighting, just waiting for that curtain to pull back to view their murdered son/daughter/husband/wife. Good work!

Sneaky Pie
by Alicia

Comment by Jutilda:
I like the leaves draping down over the top of the shot.

Sneaky Pie
by Alicia

Comment by Retroesque:
BRILLIANT~

remember II
by Alicia

Comment by Retroesque:
Oh yeah - I can see that!

Sneaky Pie
by Alicia

Comment by whiteroom:
this is so cool, free, uncontrived..

Sneaky Pie
by Alicia

Comment by pjangel:
Great poem to go with a great picture....

remember
by Alicia

Comment by idp:
Intriguing again - you obviously like disrupting expectations with these - so - i don't like the balance between the frames, i don't like the typeface or the colours or the layout - and i don't like the image, which i feel has no bearing whatever on the text

overall i really like the image as a whole !!! it has an uneasy feeling, like a joke that i don't fully understand - i feel excluded by it - but fascinated

good work

Dunes
by Alicia

Comment by idp:
here is a place of disaffection - time before and time after in a dim light

or

i must go down to the sea again
to the land of sea and sky
i left my shirt and socks there
i wonder if they're dry

both good possibilities - i like this picture - its got a spiriot of exploration - man against the kalahari - kind of feelibng

Prayer to Persephone
by Alicia

Comment by idp:
Interesting effect - bleached and slightly scratchy - it works well with this image

How now, spirit! Whither wander you?
by Alicia

Comment by idp:
swifter than the moon's sphere and i do serve the fairy queen to dew her orbs upon the green. There you go - and from memeory too although I can't prove it. I like the papery effect here - not sure that the poetry fits it