Sweet Melissa
by militarygirl10

Comment by PhotoRyno:
eyes

October
by militarygirl10

Comment by hjolli:
Nice pic, but horrible frame

Sweet Melissa
by militarygirl10

Comment by jpochard:
My first reaction is that she looks like she's all cramped inside a box. I like the soft glow, though maybe slightly overdone for my tastes. Technically, it's okay for me, but the pose just doesn't look flattering or comfortable.

Sweet Melissa
by militarygirl10

Comment by L1:
Very pretty model and nicely composed portrait. Love the softness.

October
by militarygirl10

Comment by Blackbox:
I think the focus could be a little more sharper and it's kinda dark. Maybe you could have gone to the other side of that river where the sun is shining? Hey, that border is cool...how'd you do that!?!?!?! Good luck to ya!

Sweet Melissa
by militarygirl10

Comment by tazza:
Helllloooo! great use of soft focus and lovely model. This one stand out so far, 10!

October
by militarygirl10

Comment by dallasdux:
I don't count off for borders but this one really distracts in my opinion. A solid dark (black) border on the edges would help this one. Right now the current border not only separates part of the picture, but it also cuts through part of your subject (the model's right arm). While I don't take off, I would likely give the photo an extra point for those corrections. Score: 6.

Sweet Melissa
by militarygirl10

Comment by glad2badad:
Nice clevage. Oh, and a pretty face too. :D A little bit strong on the PP, but a nice image overall. In some small way I think it's a shame that you had to go the seductive route with her apparel as she IS a very beautiful lady and needs few distractions to bring across a stunning image. Anyway, good luck in the challenge.

Sweet Melissa
by militarygirl10

Comment by sherpet:
Lovely smile here...

October
by militarygirl10

Comment by 777STAN:
This is a great portrait with good lighting on your subject and nice bokeh (although debatable to call it bokeh or just soft-focus landscape!) :)