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11/13/2006 11:21:11 AM |
| nice portrait but don't like the frame and the background is crooked. The white water in the background is kind of distracting too. |
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11/07/2006 12:40:11 PM |
| Good portrait, but I think it will be better if you lose the frame. |
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11/05/2006 09:21:24 AM |
| would be better w/o the frame |
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11/04/2006 05:09:07 AM |
| Nice pic, but horrible frame |
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11/03/2006 07:05:15 PM |
| I think the focus could be a little more sharper and it's kinda dark. Maybe you could have gone to the other side of that river where the sun is shining? Hey, that border is cool...how'd you do that!?!?!?! Good luck to ya! |
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11/03/2006 01:38:03 PM |
| I don't count off for borders but this one really distracts in my opinion. A solid dark (black) border on the edges would help this one. Right now the current border not only separates part of the picture, but it also cuts through part of your subject (the model's right arm). While I don't take off, I would likely give the photo an extra point for those corrections. Score: 6. |
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11/02/2006 08:12:11 PM |
| This is a great portrait with good lighting on your subject and nice bokeh (although debatable to call it bokeh or just soft-focus landscape!) :) |
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11/02/2006 01:06:12 PM |
| focus seems a bit soft .. |
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11/02/2006 07:14:30 AM |
| gorgeous eyes...not sure about the frame... |
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11/01/2006 04:12:49 PM |
| Love the shot - could do without the border lines though |
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11/01/2006 02:16:53 PM |
| The border completely distracted from this picture. Poor choice. 4 |
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11/01/2006 11:10:38 AM |
| Overall I like the shot, I'm not crazy about the border though. I think it is a little distracting. |
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11/01/2006 04:42:21 AM |
| A litte more blue into the whites of those teeth might have helped here?, they look a bit yellow on my monitor. |
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11/01/2006 01:01:18 AM |
| I think since you were going for capturing the arms in landscape, I think both arms fully centered would have had a better effect. Lovely model and good lighting. |
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