Concentration
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Comment by kevrobertson:
Nice expression
might have benifited from another light source
but then again that is not the look that you were going for...
Good luck

Concentration
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Comment by Cantique:
She has amazing eyes.

Concentration
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Comment by Phileine:
why so grainy?

Concentration
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Comment by justine:
Great eyes and lips!! Fantastic face, and expression. I don't like the wrinkles in the shirt and jacket. The shoulder pad looks too big. Nice work and good luck.

Concentration
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Comment by Malokata:
Grainy, though the light is otherwise effective. Also, sort of has the cut-out halo still around the top of her head.

Burri's Magnum crates
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Comment by Konador:
The black line is a bit distracting, but other than that I really like this photo. Lots of different textures and shades and stuff. 9

Burri's Magnum crates
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Comment by C-town driver:
The subject is nicely composed. But I find the roof line and shadows on the floos slightly distracting. Nice shot otherwise.

Burri's Magnum crates
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Comment by Jesuispeure:
The lighting and composition are beautiful. I find I like the picture as a whole a lot more than I like the subject matter, does that make sense?

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Comment by adine:
While the diagonal in the background is dramatic and mirrors the line between the boxes, I'm distracted by it because I don't know what it is and how it fits into the picture. The shadow and light in the forground is interesting too, but likewise does not add meaning. I like the boxes and your choice of black and white - it makes the lettering pop out nicely.

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Comment by KarenB:
the heavy diagonal (window? wall?) is really distracting. however, I do like the tones of the photo and the play of shadows on the floor. I can see you probably had no choice in the matter, it just makes the photo top heavy.