Leilana-Portrait-on-Black2.jpg
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by mpeters:
I like your lighting on this one. It would be nice to control the light spilling onto her shoulder as it is rather bright and takes away from her face. IMO.

Good job!

Leilana-Portrait-on-Black.jpg
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by mpeters:
Just a thought... Had you moved your camera left light to the left and more behind the girl, i think it would have set off her hair nicely. Your flash power looks perfect. Then move the RH light so it directs more lighting into her face(on the axis of her nose for example). I think this may give you more drama.

Wanna Play?
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by HarveyG:
Moody and dark, almost Stephen King'ish. Wierd but apt in a few quarters.

Wanna Play?
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by JokersSoul:
That is soooo creepy! Nice!

Wanna Play?
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by Luci11e:
creepy!

Thoughtless
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by Gatorguy:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I'm probably not the best one to critique this image because I am one of the apparent minority that really likes this shot. In fact, when I first opened it up I though I was going to be critiquing one of the top shots, but was quite shocked when I scrolled down and saw how it did!

To me, this meets the challenge perfectly. I don't get how people missed the parallel lines in this image??? I like the slight angle to it, and the composition of where the people are placed in the image. I actually think it would have been a good entry in the fine art challenge.

Really my only negative is the hot spot in the foreground.

If I had voted in this challege I would have given this an 8 or maybe a 9 depending on my mood at the time.

Keep experimenting.

Message edited by author 2010-03-10 14:28:23.

Weeping Willow
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by Ja-9:
a bit of motion blur??? I like the color and tone of it...very abstract

BW:B
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by Krisby:
I love the soft, unclear feeling of the image!

Weeping Willow
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by see:
This has a lot to say. On my wall, No, in a gallery, yes..

Weeping Willow
by MinsoPhoto

Comment by bmartuch:
I like the effect. More like crying.