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Date Uploaded: Mar 10, 2010

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 03/12/2010 03:25:35 PM
I think you have too much light on the hair and not the face. The most important part of almost any portrait is the face.

Don't get me wrong, the light on the hair is still good but you just need to move some light to her face. I would also adjust the light from hitting the back of her head to make it hit the top of her head and let it spill down onto the rest of her hair and shoulders.

Also I think your white balance is off some. Try adjusting it to somewhere around 5300k.

Message edited by author 2010-03-12 15:26:56.
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 03/11/2010 01:48:15 AM
Just a thought... Had you moved your camera left light to the left and more behind the girl, i think it would have set off her hair nicely. Your flash power looks perfect. Then move the RH light so it directs more lighting into her face(on the axis of her nose for example). I think this may give you more drama.
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