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| 08/25/2002 01:14:00 AM |
threeby FranziskaLangComment by Kathyc: Composition, sharpness are good. It's simple and direct. The shadow is nice. Maybe it's just me, but there seems to be too much yellow. A different color in the background would probably make it more appealing to me and make the subjects "jump" out a little more. Not white---but something with less yellow. |
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| 08/23/2002 02:07:00 PM |
threeby FranziskaLangComment by crisa58: I like the variety of colors, the subdued background, the hint of shadow. It's sharp without being over done. In short, striking and dynamic. well done. 9 |
| 08/23/2002 07:06:00 AM |
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| 08/23/2002 06:23:00 AM |
threeby FranziskaLangComment by LindaLee: Nice composition and I like the effect of the DOF. Would have like to have seen the colors of the pencils "pop" out from the background a little more - perhaps a tiny bit more light on them. lhall |
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| 08/22/2002 05:03:00 PM |
threeby FranziskaLangComment by npage: Very nice photo. Composition is simple, but effective. Color focus, exposuere, and etc. are great. |
| 08/22/2002 10:03:00 AM |
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| 08/22/2002 01:54:00 AM |
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| 08/21/2002 11:01:00 PM |
threeby FranziskaLangComment by jimmsp: Composition - quite good Technical Aspects - quite good Meets Challenge - yes Visual Impact / Originality ΓΆ€“ high Other suggestions ΓΆ€“ did you try a whiter background? Probably would have set pencils off better. Jim msp |
| 08/21/2002 05:26:00 PM |
threeby FranziskaLangComment by HBunch: Simple but very nice. The clarity is great on those tips. I like how it fades away with the green one in the back. Lighting is great and the colors are very nice. I was kind of wondering though, why you used 2 primary colors and 1 secondary color? yellow, red and blue would be the logical combination of colors, but maybe how you have it, it was a better visual combination. I wasn't saying it was a bad thing, just wondering if you did it that way on purpose or not. Great photo and good luck in the challenge. |
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| 08/20/2002 04:38:00 PM |
threeby FranziskaLangComment by muckpond: I enjoy this shot but I think the background color is somewhat distracting. Don't get me wrong -- I'm a fan of backgrounds. But the color of this one is just too similar to the yellow pencil...I think it detracts from the focus of the shot. muckpond |
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