The Stars
by MadMan2k

Comment:
There is so much excitement in the text that I almost miss what you're trying to sell to me.

It's beginning to look alot like Christmas
by PennyStreet

Comment:
There is so much going on in the background that it overwhelms the jewelry, in my opinion, instead of highlighting it.

Precious
by hajeka

Comment:
I like the concept here...

I wish the blue stone had a highlight or sparkle on the top left to really make your jewelry take over the image.

As it is, the lower left is the bright spot that my eyes keep going to...

Perhaps if you'd cropped it as a magazine ad, cropping out all of the stuff the ring is sitting on and then had your clever text still in the upper right?

The Brooch
by Bear_Music

Comment:
The text is so sharp that it makes the jewelry that you're trying to see seem out of focus to me.

I like the composition of the advertisement.

Dragonfly
by GeorgesBogaert

Comment:
I love the sparkles! I'm not sure what the dragonfly adds... It seems out of place.

I think the text should not be so exciting, since it competes with the jewelry that you're trying to make me want to buy.

jewels
by Tiberius

Comment:
This is a very well-done macro of a watch. But... I don't know that seeing the inside of something is going to make me want to buy the outside that I have not seen.

Unless... maybe it were an advertisement for a house. :D

you will buy
by jmritz

Comment:
I have no idea what this advertisement is selling.

plain
by NiallOTuama

Comment:
I don't see any jewelry in your jewelry advertisement.

Sparkles
by 2mccs

Comment:
I don't understand what you're advertising for me to want to buy.

Fall Nature Collection
by grahamgator

Comment:
Whew! THANK YOU!

Finally. Something that's appealing and advertisement-like!

The colors are wonderful. The jewelry is creatively displayed and I love the background.


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