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Challenge: Jewelry Advertisement II (Expert Editing*)
Collection: Portfolio
Date: Oct 26, 2014
Date Uploaded: Oct 26, 2014

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Statistics
Place: 18 out of 35
Avg (all users): 5.4904
Avg (commenters): 5.8889
Avg (participants): 5.5833
Avg (non-participants): 5.4625
Views since voting: 380
Views during voting: 247
Votes: 104
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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11/06/2014 11:15:14 AM
Way to busy and I find the texture on the writing to distracting
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11/05/2014 03:30:19 PM
I like the composition and the sparkle effect really adds to this. Nice work!
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11/05/2014 08:32:19 AM
Draw a diagonal from the bottom left to upper right. Everything above the line is wonderful. Really nicely done. Below the line? The bokeh/blry on the bottom of the dragonfly wings is extremely distracting, as is the forced blur white wash. Top half gets and 8, bottom half gets a 4. Do the math.
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11/03/2014 10:18:24 AM
Very glamorous!
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11/02/2014 01:25:17 PM
For me, there are too many pieces of jewelry included. I like the star-bursts in the text, but would prefer less on the jewelry. Since the title is "Dragonfly" the focus could have been on that piece.
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11/01/2014 09:25:30 PM
I love the sparkles! I'm not sure what the dragonfly adds... It seems out of place.

I think the text should not be so exciting, since it competes with the jewelry that you're trying to make me want to buy.
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10/31/2014 05:17:24 PM
Why is everything pushed off the the edges of the image with such a large empty space occupying much of the image? And what the heck is that red thing????
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10/31/2014 10:09:05 AM
Nicely done, but I would have preferred more DOF on the wedding bands and the dragonfly to match the items at the top.
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10/31/2014 08:04:04 AM
I like the jewelry & sparkles, but what is that red piece?
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10/31/2014 01:58:32 AM
good idea can see this as a counter card
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