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| 01/20/2003 11:07:24 PM |
Drive 55?by r_sandlerComment: Nicely done. I like the colors, and you have a great effect here. I think rotating/tilting it slightly to the left, to even the sign up, would have helped some. |
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| 01/20/2003 10:55:57 PM |
Abandoned to the Cold Prairieby jimmspComment: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karma
COMPOSITION
The placement of the building really sets this up to be a strong picture. It is not in the center, which would make the picture static, but it is not too close to an edge, giving the viewer's eyes room to "roam" through the picture. I like that you have some space in the foreground, and if there had been a really old fence to add interest, that would have been really effective, but I understand you were taking pictures, not building fences. :-) The dark streak in the field also adds to the composition by giving it some "motion."
TECHNIQUE
The focus is very good here, and I love the effect the bw has. The only suggestion I can see to make here is to maybe rotate it left just a hair, as it feels like I am leaning the right looking at it.
OVERALL EFFECT
The first thing I thought of when I saw this was the dustbowl in the midwest. It reminds me of some stories (Steinbeck) and poems I have read from and about that era. Very desolate and stark. This would make an awesome illustration for a book like that. Great work. The more I looked at this, the more I liked it! |
| 01/20/2003 10:45:29 PM |
Sundae Bestby DougPazComment: That looks really good. I like the contrast of the red tablecloth and the blue background. Very pleasant picture to look at. |
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| 01/20/2003 10:38:44 PM |
Leche de Rosaby bamasterComment: Beautiful colors. I like how the white droplet "anchors" the bottom of the petal in the frame. That makes it seem very stable. Ummm, does the title mean "Rose Milk?" Obviously doesn't affect the score, I am just wondering if i am translating correctly. |
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| 01/20/2003 10:31:58 PM |
Cafe (Soy) Latteby lisaeComment: I like the depth of field that you have used on this, and the vertical framing works well too. |
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| 01/20/2003 10:30:11 PM |
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| 01/20/2003 10:28:06 PM |
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| 01/20/2003 10:21:06 PM |
Caught Snackingby AnachroniteComment: Great idea. The darkness on the top and the brightness on the bottom make it seem a little awkward to me, though. |
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| 01/20/2003 10:19:55 PM |
Milk and Cookieby JackoComment: Great capture and focus. Judging from the crumbs in the milk, this wasn't the first cookie that fell! Hope you enjoying eating your props. Good work! |
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| 01/20/2003 10:17:34 PM |
Crémeby ClubJuggleComment: I love the crop and angle on this, but the focus is a little soft around the edges for my taste, I think. |
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