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01/29/2003 12:07:02 AM |
| Thanks for the critique Alecia. None of the comments touched on the idea that this was taken outside, on a sunny day. I really was trying for that feeling, like sitting at an outdoor table at a cafe. I'm glad you picked that up! |
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01/28/2003 11:28:57 PM |
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hehe, i figured this was yours lisa! first of all, the lighting and clarity/ color depth of the pic are wonderful. i feel like i am looking at an ad in a sort of holistic magazine! the background is what does it, i think--it gives me a very soothing, nature-friendly sort of impression that fits with the soy milk theme. i think the lighting also helps this--you feel like are outside on a beautiful sunny day... who knows, maybe you are! i can see the sun glinting off of the leaves in the background--very beautiful effect.
technically--I find it interesting that you used an iso of 400---i would have never guessed that! neat image is a very cool thing--i especially like its effect on glass. also, the dof is perfect.
i have been looking at trying to see if there is something, anything i might do differently, and the only thing i can think of is perhaps the angle--maybe come in a little closer to narrow in on the glass more and angle up slightly to catch a more dramatic pour? might be cool, who knows! at any rate, i am very surprised this shot didnt rate higher--i think it is a great shot. |
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01/26/2003 05:57:08 PM |
| the background is too busy for me. |
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01/24/2003 05:50:06 PM |
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01/24/2003 01:37:42 PM |
| Very nice job. I like the size of the photo and how it accents the pouring of the Soy. Colors and lighting good as well. |
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01/23/2003 06:31:09 PM |
| Good composition and great colours. Perfect focus and the background is just right. It would have been nice to see where the milk comes from, just a little up in the left corner. Anyway a very good job that get high score from me. |
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01/23/2003 02:29:50 AM |
| That looks sooooo yummy. The colour, clarity and dof are brilliant. I also like the framing in which you chose. Great job and GL. 9:) |
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01/23/2003 02:00:54 AM |
| good idea, never thought of using soy milk with coffee. I would show the tip of the container in the upper left corner with the glass in the same position in the botoom right corner |
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01/22/2003 05:03:26 PM |
| Nice framing. The background is a bit too busy (maybe use less depth of field if possible), but I like the shot as a whole. Jacko. 9. |
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01/22/2003 07:31:18 AM |
| I think this image would be improved by losing the condensation on the glass (wipe it off, or heat the glass before putting the coffee in it) |
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01/20/2003 10:31:58 PM |
| I like the depth of field that you have used on this, and the vertical framing works well too. |
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01/20/2003 07:48:35 PM |
| Hooray for you! I almost submitted a soymilk shot, too. I love this! |
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01/20/2003 03:33:37 PM |
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01/20/2003 10:28:26 AM |
| Looks good. Kool perspective. |
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01/20/2003 06:32:50 AM |
| Good shot, Ilike the background and you have used DOF very well. |
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01/20/2003 04:15:14 AM |
| A lovely image, it makes me want caffeine now! I like the way the (soy) milk lands and mixes in with the coffee. A clever shot, and I haven't seen anybody else do it either, so it's original :) The background really suits the photograph, and the composition is superb. Well done! Good luck in the challenge :) -Annida |
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