Natalie's Rusty Playland
by Ironworker

Comment:
** Critique Club **
by cpanaioti

The motion in the little girl is what catches my eye first. Compositionally she is in the right place with respect to her motion, however the background beyond the central tree is distracting. Cropping this image at about the fifth rung of the slide's ladder but keeping the width would probably give it more impact and would isolate the subject better.

It looks like it was a grey day giving flat light. The image also seems slightly under exposed.

Keep shooting.

Colette

Primary Colors
by cardinalmom

Comment:
The colours are wonderful and the ripples in the foreground add interest, however the bright spots at the top are distracting. The eye is always drawn to the brightest part of an image. 6

Separate Reality
by flip89

Comment:
I love warped reflections like this. There are a few bright spots that are a bit distracting, however the overall composition is well done and the exposure seems right. 7

The Missing Link
by brownt

Comment:
You've captured the texture quite well, however the lighting seems a little flat. 6

Take Another Look ... N O W What Do You See????
by Jeileen

Comment:
The orientation seems wrong. It may have more impact in landscape mode. 5

Knot
by SMW409

Comment:
Lovely textture and colour, however the knot seems a little too close to the center and the focus seems a little soft. 6

edit: spelling

Message edited by author 2004-05-10 08:16:10.

Flight
by goinskiing

Comment:
Good use of DOF. Nice and sharp . Lines lead the viewer right into the image, however the lighting seems a little flat. 6

Abstract Found
by amsmyth

Comment:
The cut wood has some nice texture. Move in, zoom in, take advantage of it. The trees in the background are distracting. 4

Shall We Dance?
by OneSweetSin

Comment:
The colours are nice and blend together well, however the negative effect does nothing for me. Also, the bright area on the left is a bit distracting though you may not have had a choice on the position for your shot. 4

Are you an alien?
by spiller

Comment:
Interesting perspective on a tulip. The composition seems a little out of balance or awkward. Maybe if the crop weren't so tight it would work better. (crop meaning in camera - less zoom or post processing) 5