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05/10/2004 03:15:58 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Composition: Very intresting. You have strong diagonal lines with excellent forced perspective. I question the crop of the photo - I think I'd like to see the louvers framed to start more to the left for a pleasing line that keeps the eye in frame.
Background: great muted color and soft focus on the grid.
Camera Work: (Focus/DOF/Exposure) Great DOF and focus on the foreground elements. The edges are nice and crisp and add to the color difference along the edge.
Post Processing: n/a
The Challenge: Wonderful abstract, great muted colors and compelling lines.
My Opinion: I like the pallette and color balance very much. The muted tones and dreamy quality are wonderfully evocative - it gives the feel that this object is from the fifties because of the blueness of the white. The composition of lines is only slightly off to me - an angle that gives a greater incline to the louvers or a crop or shift to the left would also help, IMO.
Please let me know if these comments have been of help to you. Feel free to PM me if you have any other questions about my feedback. |
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05/08/2004 07:01:19 AM |
| The tones of this are very cool, almost retro. I like how the picture is almost divided diagonally - very interesting, and the DOF is great. |
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05/07/2004 07:42:42 PM |
| Good use of DOF. Nice and sharp . Lines lead the viewer right into the image, however the lighting seems a little flat. 6 |
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05/07/2004 01:50:35 AM |
| I like the arrangement and subject. Lighting looks a bit flat making the rest of the image appear dull. Fiddle with the levels a bit as an experiment to enhance contrast. |
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05/04/2004 12:01:12 PM |
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05/03/2004 09:56:50 PM |
| Interesting abstract. like the way you've allowed the focus to drop off as you move into the image. Nice selection of colors. |
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05/03/2004 04:41:25 AM |
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05/03/2004 12:47:43 AM |
| nice color and saturation-composition is very intriguing |
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